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Hyosuke Asako

Hyosuke Asako


Posts : 659
Type : Sunagakure
Rank : Sannin
Elements : Poison mainly

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation - Page 2 Icon_minitime1Sat Nov 07, 2009 4:14 pm

Asako stared in the golden eyes of the clone with her jade ones.
"The first one, genin. The second one, chuunin. The third one, jounin I guess...This is such a bother. Fine. I'll end this one too if I can..."
She shook her head and leaned against a wall and yawned.
"I just don't feel like fighting you, but since I'm not such a coward either, we'll battle. I leave you the first move." she said, almost smiling.
And on those words, she got in a fighting stance...
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Surpentheon Fanglord
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Posts : 929
Type : Forsaken
Rank : Grand Sannin/Sage/Ex-Kage
Elements : Lightning (Most often)

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation - Page 2 Icon_minitime1Sat Nov 07, 2009 4:50 pm

Clone 3: Reaching to his sword, he readies his hand on its handle. He then launches himself forward heading straight for Asa.
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Hyosuke Asako

Hyosuke Asako


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Elements : Poison mainly

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation - Page 2 Icon_minitime1Sat Nov 07, 2009 5:28 pm

Asako sighed and punched the ground with her fist, full of chakra and with all her strength. The ground shook, cracked and suddenly broke in a split of a second and rocks flew everywhere. Asako observed the clone, ready to dodge the next attack...
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Type : Forsaken
Rank : Grand Sannin/Sage/Ex-Kage
Elements : Lightning (Most often)

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation - Page 2 Icon_minitime1Sat Nov 07, 2009 8:49 pm

Clone 3: Watching her as she makes her punch, the clone jumps backward. Flipping in the air, he unsheaths his sword and when he does, a bright flash is emitted from its unsheathing. This flash only lasts but a fraction of a second. It washes over everything and vanishes just the same. But after the flash vanishes, the clone once again charges Asa moving easily past the obstacles she put in its way.

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Jutsus Used:

Flash- (D-Rank) a genjutsu activated when I unsheath my sword. It creates a flash that I activate the genjutsu in. The Genjutsu is imprinted on the eye from the flash and this makes it harder to release. The opponent seems to still be in the real world but finds themself unable to beat the user of this jutsu by any means. I usually follow this jutsu with another to strike at them when their down.
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Hyosuke Asako

Hyosuke Asako


Posts : 659
Type : Sunagakure
Rank : Sannin
Elements : Poison mainly

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation - Page 2 Icon_minitime1Sun Nov 08, 2009 10:31 am

Immediatly the young girl closed her eyes, feeling the charka that was used to create the flash. She would have to rely on her ears only for a while and that was going to take a lot of concentration...
She heard the rocks flying around, the clone move on them, the sword get ready to strike...
"I already hate this fight..." she thought, waiting for the clone to strike...
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Surpentheon Fanglord
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Posts : 929
Type : Forsaken
Rank : Grand Sannin/Sage/Ex-Kage
Elements : Lightning (Most often)

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation - Page 2 Icon_minitime1Sun Nov 08, 2009 11:50 am

As he nears Asa, he swings his sword at her chest in a diagonal down strike. But he holds the tail of his sword in his opposite hand, ready to throw it and catch her if tried to escape. He wasn't gonna give her a choice it seemed. This one was after blood. He wasn't gonna settle for less. So now the mighty sword was bearing down and a secret attack lurked behind it.
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Hyosuke Asako

Hyosuke Asako


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Type : Sunagakure
Rank : Sannin
Elements : Poison mainly

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation - Page 2 Icon_minitime1Sun Nov 08, 2009 12:13 pm

Asako used quickly the replacement jutsu again and disappeared out of the clone's view for a second. At the same time, she threw 3 poisoned needles at the clone (by hearing) and tried to get rid of the genjutsu by stabbing herself with a kunai. And right after that, she healed herself again, scared that the sent of blood would make the clone more agressive...
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Surpentheon Fanglord
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Type : Forsaken
Rank : Grand Sannin/Sage/Ex-Kage
Elements : Lightning (Most often)

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation - Page 2 Icon_minitime1Sun Nov 08, 2009 12:25 pm

The clones body opens and the needles pass through him without any harm. The clone then lands and the genjutsu is released. When she comes around, the clone stands a couple feet away from her electricity in both of his hands. Smirking he waits for her next move not catching wiff of the small blood.
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Hyosuke Asako

Hyosuke Asako


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Type : Sunagakure
Rank : Sannin
Elements : Poison mainly

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation - Page 2 Icon_minitime1Sun Nov 08, 2009 12:36 pm

Asako made quickly a few hand signs, and made several clones of herself, encercling the enemy, trying to confuse him. Than, she made all the clones run in his direction and all preparing "Paralyzing Hand"...

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Name: Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Range: N/A
Description: The user creates several intangible copies of him/her that disappear when damage is sustained.
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Surpentheon Fanglord
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Posts : 929
Type : Forsaken
Rank : Grand Sannin/Sage/Ex-Kage
Elements : Lightning (Most often)

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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation - Page 2 Icon_minitime1Sun Nov 08, 2009 12:40 pm

The clone vanishes entirely leaving only a burn mark on the ground where he stood as the clones made their way towards him. He then appeared up in the air. At that moment, he slammed his hands together forcing the electricity out of his hands. As it shot forth, it widened and spread till it covered further then the circle of clones. It would crash into the earth destroying all in its circle. Only a mighty crater would exist afterwards.

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Jutsus Used:

Denkousochi- (C-Rank) A technique he developed while doing his sage trials. He uses his bodies natural ability to focus and condense lightning in his body. After condensing and focusing, he then releases it in the opposite direction he wishes to move. When released, it causes the user to be propelled at the same speed the lightning is released. This enables the user to move faster than even the flicker technique. The drawback is, the user can't make sharp turns while in the middle of using this technique. Straight lines to slight curved is all this tech allows. It's level of mastery is decided by level. As the more you master it, the more control and training is needed.

Roar of a Thousand Birds- (A-Rank) By creating lightning in both hands, the user then slams their two hands together. The hands collide starting at the palms making a V. This shape allows a path for the lightning to escape. When the hands/palms collide, the lightning connects and is freed in a radical pattern. It then shoots out the hands in a wave-like pattern. ( < o O ) This attack was developed and evolved after watching Chidori.
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Hyosuke Asako

Hyosuke Asako


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Rank : Sannin
Elements : Poison mainly

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Right before the jutsu could be completely executed, Asako used a replacement technique and hid somewhere in the room, waiting for the clone to end his jutsu and land on the ground...

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Name: Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Range: N/A
Description: The user replaces his/her body with a nearby object or another person just before getting hit or found.
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Posts : 929
Type : Forsaken
Rank : Grand Sannin/Sage/Ex-Kage
Elements : Lightning (Most often)

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Clone 3: The clone finshed his move leaving a huge crater in the floor. As he fell, he brought his arms in close and seemed to be readying something.
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Hyosuke Asako


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Elements : Poison mainly

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Asako stayed hidden, and didn't make a sound. She eve slowed down her breathing and prepared in silence a new jutsu...
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PostSubject: Re: Asa's Evaluation   Asa's Evaluation - Page 2 Icon_minitime1Sun Nov 08, 2009 1:23 pm

The clone then expeled a thin layer of lightning from out of his entire body. It spread out from him and electrified the whole room. Everything was shocked. but not majorly. just a slight tingle was all it did.

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Hydro Lock- (C-Rank) The user expels a burst of static that covers the field and electrifies anything with water in it or on it. This acts as a solid defense for but a second and can be used to act as a targeting jutsu for other lightning moves.
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Hyosuke Asako

Hyosuke Asako


Posts : 659
Type : Sunagakure
Rank : Sannin
Elements : Poison mainly

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Asako growled inwardly to the shock. It hurted her a little and gave her the strange feeling inside of her...
Quickly, the jade eyed young girl filled her fists full of chakra, jumped up and slammed them in the ground. The ground cracked and fell apart, showing the caves that were right under it...
Asako jumped quickly to the exit of the room and waited to see the result of her attack...
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As she hit the ground, the clones eyes shot wide. he fell down and was crushed beneath debri.
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Hyosuke Asako

Hyosuke Asako


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Rank : Sannin
Elements : Poison mainly

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Asako sighed, stretched and walked outside of the mansion, trying to find her sensei back, her hands behind her head and pretty much bored already...
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