Agni Schiwatas Bloodline (Flame God's Breath)

Background Description:

The Schiwatas clan is specialized in the arts of fire, it first appeared in Sunagakure at the same time when the First Great Ninja War ended. The creators of the clan were Adam Schiwatas and Azura Schiwatas. They specially trained so that they will control the kinetic energy around them and the heat too. As the time passed they developed new jutsus and a bloodline that will increase the human speed and focus to the point were they were called "Genius". Their developed a new ability that will allow them to speed up the kinetic energy resulting in masive explosion and melting solid objects. Other people tried to do the same as them but it seemed that only they could do it and they discovered it was actually a bloodline that they unlocked. As the family continued their life they saw that from their children that different effects will apear before the bloodline will be activated.


When the bloodline starts activating to a person they will feel the following effects:

1. At the age of 5 the user will suffer a memory loss
2. After some years headaches and temporalily lost eyesight
3. The felling of burning skin
4. And after they regain there eyesight they will remember everything that happened before the age of 5
5. Their eyes will become bloody red when the bloodline is fully activated

Advantages:

1. Increased speed and focus
2. Chakra Increase (the chakra they had before will be only 20% of their new chakra)
3. Ability to manipulate fire so that they won't get hurt by it.

Disadvantages:

1. Low Strength
2. Weaker towards water jutsus
3. May burn their own body if they are not concentrated when using a clan jutsu


Jutsu List:

Name: Microwave Hands
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Description: The kinetic enegry around the users hands will start speeding up and they can create massive explosions and melt threw almost everything they touch, even the human body

Name: Heat Explosion
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Description: The user touches the ground and accelarates the kinetic energy around him sending spires of fire towards his enemy at high speed. The spires are so hot that if you are at a distance of 1 meter or less from them they can still burn the opponents skin.

Name: Energy Conversion
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Description: This jutsu absorb the heat from the surrounding area, it it's used to much it may cause the objects to freeze. If used against a fire ninjutsu it can absorb it completly, if used against a taijutsu attack it will make it weaker and even completly useless (i refer to the taijutsu because a taijutsu attack is based on heat and if the heat gets absorbed the attack will get weaker). After the heat absorbition they can use it to boost a fire attack

Name: Fourth Wave
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Description: This jutsu can only be used after the jutsu "Energy Conversion". This jutsu allows the user to convert the absorbed heat into and energy blast and release it form his hand. The enrgy blast will be like a ray of super heat sended towards the target

I have to comment erm I dont see how anything can increase intellegence. The use of chakra can increase focus but if you dont know for example the awnser to a question then using chakra isn't going to make you know it. Studying is the only way to increase your character's intellegence.

ok edited some things

The history seem's okay.... but if you could please add the village this clan started in. Plus add if this clan will spread at all, if not then please tell who exactly can join this clan.

The only thing really I see wrong is that the jutsu ranks you have, would be limited to chuunin and up. It would be hard for genins to learn them unless taught by a higher rank clan member.

Everything else seems approval to me, the advantages and disavantages seems no god moddish. They check to be okay for clan members weaknesses and strengthes.

well i will put the village they started in and about the jutsus i thought i will train them by myself

ok i edited it

Now where is the clan located at? I still don't see the village, but sorry if it's there. I didn't get any sleep last night.

History and the age of 5 stuff sound so weird and out-of-tempo. O.o;;

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Their developed a new ability that will allow them to speed up the kinetic energy resulting in masive explosion and melting solid objects.

Kinetic energy is merely force. o-o It has nothing to do with heat. o.o Kinetic energy forms heat, only when it is rubbed against a surface, as it stimulates the electrons at the edge for incoluntary movement, thus creating heat. =x Kinetic energy does not create heat automatically. LOGIC FAIL. o.o;

Kinetic energy forms heat; for example, the way you light a match. When you strike a match against the surface fast enough, the immense heat caused from the kinetic movement energy makes the match light up in flames. Just like one of my jutsus. =x

Then again, history isn't that important... so yeah. xD But your jutsu description must be changed since kinetic energy/FORCE doesn't exist all around you in the air. v_V;;

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3. Ability to manipulate fire so that they won't get hurt by it.

I don't get this. o.o;; Do you mean your skin won't be affected by normal fire, or that you can manipulate fire, without creating it?

And...

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2. Chakra Increase (the chakra they had before will be only 10% of their new chakra)

This is like, even greater than Kyuubi chakra. ._. You can have five times as much chakra as before, not ten times as much. x.X;;

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3. Ability to manipulate fire so that they won't get hurt by it.


I don't get this. o.o;; Do you mean your skin won't be affected by normal fire, or that you can manipulate fire, without creating it?

I mean the skin is not affected by the heat created from the jutsus


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2. Chakra Increase (the chakra they had before will be only 10% of their new chakra)


This is like, even greater than Kyuubi chakra. ._. You can have five times as much chakra as before, not ten times as much. x.X;;

Ok i will change that

Accepted. o_o