Yahiko Kenshin (Finished)

Subject: Yahiko Kenshin (Finished) Fri Jan 22, 2010 10:01 pm

General Information
Name: Yahiko Kenshin
Age: 12
Height: 4'5
Weight: 81.4 lbs
DOB: 18/9

Appearance: Yahiko has natural purple hair, but when in direct sunlight in turns into a pinkish colour, the hair itself is quite long. His eyes are of a aqua-type tone, with a black ring in the middle. He wears a purple coat that covers most of his body, down to the ankles. He normally wears white shoes with ankle socks. Underneath he wears a basic white shirt with jeans.

Bio: Yahiko, or Hearty Samurai as his family called him, was very attached to his family, untold of when his was born, Yahiko always asked when he was born, his family denied to tell him every time. One day, everyone gathered, Yahiko was told that he was a 9 year old , Yahiko was startled and did not believe it, but so he stuck with it.

Yahiko was treated as a normal child, he needed no special needs, yet he helped the poor. His father wood sometimes spy on him when he stole food and gave it to the poor, he also told stories to the children. He accepted no payment from anyone, he just did what he want to do. One day, a person came to Yahiko and they talked about bargaining on what he did for the poor, Yahiko refused every time he asked. One day the arguing stopped, the man was no were to be found, Unfortunately Yahiko found the man’s dead body in an alleyway, near the house. Yahiko called the police, (ninja, whatever) Yahiko was called a suspect and was put on aggressive hypnosis in front of the ANBU Black Ops. This lead Yahiko to become a ninja for how cool they were and how they helped people like he did.

One year later, Yahiko was not able to start the academy since the birth records wert accurate, so his dad(a retired Jouin)started to train Yahiko by himself. The training based on increasing his charka level, which over a few months, grew quite quickly. Yahiko’s training was done near the end of the year. It was retinue for Yahiko to get the mail, so he did. The letters were manly addressed to his parents, yet, for the first time he had a letter addressed to him. He opened it straight away and it revealed that, according to the KazeKage, he was a Genin. Yahiko was so happy he jumped in joy,

Personality: Quite happy all the time, tries to smile as much as he can, quite energetic most of the time, always in a happy mood, quite talkative.

Likes: Anything to make friends or family happy, training, talking to friends.
Dislikes: Missions, anything that involves long durations of time, doing something that’s already done.

Ninja Information
Rank: Genin
Village: Sunagakure-Hidden Sand Village
Combat Strengths: Perfect Focus, Speed, Big Amount Of Charka, Defense
Combat Weaknesses: Quite Slow Reaction, Stamina,Agility,Doesn't Combo Attacks
Mental Strengths: High Intelligence, Good Problem Solver
Mental Weaknesses: When Stamina runs out, tends not to think about the situation.
Equipment: Throwable Wakizashi hidden in coat. Weapon currently has no name. Has around 5 shuriken and kunai, sometimes brings food pills

Jutsu:

Henge no Jutsu - Transformation no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Element: None
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Element: None
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Bushin no jutsu - Clone no jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Element: None
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Kauremino no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Element: N/A
Description: Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.

Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu - Groundhog Technique Decapitation
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Element:Earth
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Doton • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized.

Doton-Don Manipyure-Shon - Earth Manipulation
Type:Attack/Defence
Rank:D
Element:Earth
Doton •Don Manipyure-Shon is a Earth technique based on the Earth Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, an item made of dust or mud is created, the item created is based on the user. The item made is made with a thick amount of resources but the in exchange it requires quite a bit of charka

Doton -Don Boketsu – Earth Style-Earth Grave
Type: Guard
Rank: D
Element:Earth
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Doton • Don Boketsu is a Ninjutsu technique based on the Earth Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, the user can lift out of the ground,the amount of pillars is based on the amount of charka used on the jutsu.

Fuuton Teppoudama - Wind Bullet Technique
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Element: Wind
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Fuuton • Teppoudama is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, the user manifests a large amount of air in his mouth which he can then spit at his opponent as a large spherical projectile.

Element(s): Main Element-Earth
Side Element- Air/Wind

Other Information
Relationships: N/A
Family: All Alive

Subject: Re: Yahiko Kenshin (Finished) Sat Jan 23, 2010 12:14 am

Genin can only have one C-rank technique. o.o And Sand does not have a Hokage, it has a Kazekage. Fix your bio. o-o

Also, keep as many strengths as weaknesses. If you have 4 combat strengths, get 4 combat weaknesses. Likewise applies for mental strengths/weaknesses.

Last time I checked, your 'Manipulate shuriken' technique was only performed with the help of the sharingan. o.o That's how Sasuke did it; with his Sharingan.

Otherwise, good enough. o.o~

Subject: Re: Yahiko Kenshin (Finished) Sat Jan 23, 2010 12:43 am

Thanks, i fix the stuff u said was wrong! lol XD

Subject: Re: Yahiko Kenshin (Finished) Thu Jan 28, 2010 5:28 pm

Summoning technique is a C rank jutsu.

Kai is a C rank too, if I'm not mistaken.

Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu - Groundhog Technique Decapitation , was used by Kakashi. If I'm not mistaken, it's a higher ranked jutsu. And it's even called by some other name. Check it out on here, and tell me if it's the same jutsu, please:
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Double_Suicide_Decapitation_Technique

Doton -Don Boketsu – Earth Style-Earth Grave reminds me of this jutsu:
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth_Mausoleum_Dumpling
Is it the same or not? If not, please make the description somewhat clearer please~

Also, genin can have only one element ^^; sorry

Otherwise, nice bio and personality. Please fix all what I mentionned and I'll approve~

Subject: Re: Yahiko Kenshin (Finished) Fri Jan 29, 2010 8:22 pm

One- got rid of the summoning technique and Kai.

Two- it the same justu, just i got the jutsu description from leafninja.com.

Three- its a defense technique, its not for attacking

Four - i read this from the element guide
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For some of you who have no bloodline or clan at
all.You are called a Genius.A genius is able to learn and use one more
extra element regardless of rank.Some genius doesn't even need to have
all of the required basics to learn an advanced element as long as you
have at least one basic element. (2 for elements that require 3 or 4.)

So that what u requested.

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