Ojike Zetsubou

General Information
Name: Ojike Zetsubou
Bloodline Trait: Haini Kettou - Calcinatory Lineage (Latent).
Age: 12
Height: About 5'1"
Weight: About 100 lbs
DOB: January 16
Appearance: Ojike's appearance does not differ much from the others who currently reside at the temple. He has medium length light brown hair with hazel eyes. Aside from that one can see a scar which lies upon the upper right corner of his temple and is covered by his bangs. Often times he can be seen wearing a burgundy/white silk zen robe, though his clothing is not necessarily that of monk tradition when venturing outside of the temple walls. His body has several scars from where he has burnt himself in order to build tolerance for pain. The scars, however are covered up by his robes. He secretly hides senbon beneath his robes as well, however, these are not carried by a strap, nor a pouch. They are carried, embedded, in his skin arranged in a diagonal line spanning from his left kidney region, to his right shoulder.

Bio:

Spoiler:

Personality: Quiet and observant, Ojike is always watching others. Due to being raised by said monks Ojike has been trained to be level headed and calm at all times. This includes both on and off the battlefield. His respectful nature is most commendable but he has low self-esteem due to the lack of confidence in his own abilities. He has a tendency to be witty at his own expense. He is seen as bipolar due to his ever changing persona. To date, only two have been seen, however, there remains a third. The second persona is that of his sadistic side. This can be seen when either his positive spiritual energy is low, or when he chooses to reveal it. The third, however, is his 'inner voice.' This is often times suspected to be the will of the god Sanshouseki.

Likes: Peace and quiet, the works of Chiriku, the head monk of the temple.
Dislikes: War, greed and human ignorance.


Ninja Information
Rank: Genin
Village: Sand
Combat Strengths: Shows promise in spiritual ninjutsu and in use of fire element techniques. Has decent speed as well as moderate acrobatic skills.
Combat Weaknesses: Has trouble defending against high speed taijutsu because of a low tolerance for pain. He also is highly effected by water element techniques, and (but to a lesser significance) ice element ones as well.
Mental Strengths: Has excellent foresight and the ability to predict his opponents next attack.
Mental Weaknesses: Unsure of current abilities; low self-esteem.
Equipment:

* Zen robes
* Combat shorts
* One ritual staff (carried at all times in the right hand)
* 15 senbon (concealed beneath the zen robe; embedded in his skin)
* A medium sized pouch. (resting upon the hip)
* 10 Kunai (of various natures; within pouch)
* 10 additional senbon (within pouch)
* 5 exploding tags (within the pouch)
* 1 summoning scroll (within the pouch)
* Sandals

Jutsu:

Name: Joushou Fenikkusu Hana no Jutsu - Rising Phoenix Flower Technique
Rank: C
Range: Medium Distance; 10-20 meters (32-65 feet) radius from user.
Style: Fire element, Ninjutsu
Description:
Joushou Fenikkusu Hana no Jutsu is a lower Chuunin level ninjutsu. This technique is used to shoot at multiple targets from a medium distance by use of ones hands. The flames are estimated at a stunning 750 degrees Fahrenheit. As the distance from the user grows, it's heat intensity diminishes, though it is said to be most accurate at ten to twenty meters. Assuming this jutsu is to miss the predetermined target, as well as any other obstacle in it's path, it will diminish into nothingness at a distance of no longer than fifty meters. This jutsu can be used in combination with the ritual staff for it's maximum effect.

Name: Gekido Hasu no Jutsu - Petulance of the Lotus Technique.
Rank: D
Range: Short-medium distance; 0-15 meters (0-49 feet).
Style: Fire style, Ninjutsu
Description:
Gekido Hasu no Jutsu is a technique which has been recently discovered and mastered. It is comprised of several intricate movements that give off the appearance of flames as lotus blossoms. The user focuses chakra into his or her hands and, with a slight counter clockwise motion, forms balls of fire at the palms of their hands. The user then places their hands together and molds the chakra, infusing the two forces together. Upon taking ones hands apart, the flames have taken the shape of a lotus, which is colored a bright blue. The user then closes his or her eyes and chants "Spread, petals of the lotus, and fly with great speed. Show these fools the Petulance of the lotus." Upon completing the chant, the lotus blossom disperses into several small petal like flames which are then shot at the target with moderate speed and accuracy. These petals do not attack in linear motions and are said to be intensely hot. Contact with said lotus petal can cause severe burns on ones flesh.

Name: Hinotama - Fireball
Rank: D
Range: Short-medium distance; 0-15 meters (0-49 feet).
Style: Fire style, Ninjutsu
Description:
Hinotama is a technique in which the user focuses his or her fire element chakra within a hand or other appendage. This fireball is considered extremely hot, and can sear flesh and cause extreme burns. However, after being released from the body, it looses heat rather quickly and is considered as an ineffective attack. However, if combined with short range taijutsu or ninjutsu, this technique can be considered a perk when added to a kick, punch, or other technique. Usually, this technique is used in order to heat senbon, kunai, and other metal objects of similar uses in order to add a more painful effect to the weapon.

Name: Chakra no Kaisan - Chakra Dissolution
Rank: D
Range: Short-medium distance. 0-15 meters (0-49 feet).
Style: Ninjutsu
Description:
Chakra no Kaisan is a technique in which the user focuses and channels his or her chakra into a medium such as a staff or sword. The users chakra then is spread evenly throughout the object and is expelled at the users disposal. This technique requires the user to send his or her own chakra into it, therefore costing the user chakra. Those who are more experienced with this technique will be able to use it remotely, however during the early stages it must be confined to being connected directly with a chakra source on the body. Not only does this restrict the users range distance, but it effects how he or she will fight and which area they hold it. This is usually the hands, feet or other areas where the item can be held.

Name: Lunar Lux Lucis no Jutsu - Lunar Shining Light Technique
Rank: D
Range: 0-15 meters (0-49 feet) radius from user.
Style: Ninjutsu
Description:
Lunar Lux Lucis no Jutsu is said to be passed down from generation to generation of the Zetsubou clan. This jutsu is used to illuminate an area of even the most infinite darkness. It is given this name due to the light appearing the same shape as the moon during it's rotation around the Earth. It grows more powerful during full moons, and on the day of the new moon, cannot be seen at all. However, it has no practical use in battle, due to it's visibly low light. This jutsu can be used in combination with the ritual staff for more effective lighting.

Name: Meimei Jujika no Jutsu - Divine Cross Technique
Rank: D
Range: N/A
Style: Poison Cure/Summon
Description:
This jutsu is used in combination with a special scroll found solely within the temple walls. The scroll is used to summon an elixir which can cure most simple toxins and may help speed up healing marginally. However, this jutsu cannot be used more than once per scroll and should be used sparingly. When used in large amounts it has been known to disorient those who consume it. This jutsu is given its name due to the glow of chakra that is released into the surrounding terrain. It is said to take the shape of a golden colored cross which is imprinted on the ground.

Name: Bushin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Range: N/A
Style: Ninjutsu
Description:
The Clone Technique has been the foundation to academy level jutsu across the globe. In this jutsu the user is to create several intangible copies of oneself. This jutsu is especially for covert missions into enemy territory as well as distracting or confusing enemies on the battlefield. However, when a copy is hit with a sufficient amount of force or poisoned, it will disperse immediately.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Range: N/A
Style: Ninjutsu
Description:
The Replacement Technique has been used in many a sticky situation. Shinobi have been known to use it in order to dodge anothers attack as well as to serve as a distraction to help evade them in and off the battlefield. This jutsu is comprised of a swift action, usually replacing oneself with a nearby object or person so that they can evade an attack, or avoid being found.

Name: Konbi Henge - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Range: N/A
Style: Ninjutsu
Description:
The Transformation Technique is primarily used in order to transform oneself into another person, animal, or object. This is a great asset to a person who is attempting to go undercover, provided that they can do a flawless transformation, that is. However, sloppy transformations can often times lead to a Shinobi's downfall.

Element(s): Fire

Other Information
Relationships: Friends, Hyosuke Asako and Yakate Veroshi; Constantine - Fellow bloodline carrier.
Family: Currently unknown

x-x First off, you need to list all academy jutsus that you learn, like kage no bushin, henge jutsu and the other basic academy jutsus. Then you need to take out the posion element jutsu since you can not know posion elements with being katon element user.

Next can you add a bit more to your bio? It seems a bit short for a genin, look at other historys for examples on what to do towards your bio. Plus in your bio, there is no way you can be kept in a temple and you have to explain your birth and how you found your way to the academy as well your village currently.

For your strengths and weaknesses, it is really impossibly to be able to disflect genjutsus right now with you being a genin and not knowing the jutsu for disspelling the genjutsus.


This is all I can see for now, Other mod's may point out things that I miss in your profile.

mari is correct you need o add more info about about your character. So untill then not approved

o.o I think it looks perfectly fine now~

Approved~

(e.e and for your information, this is Asa-chan speaking here. Too lazy to log in on my other account~)

Approved~<3

Just to be clear, the two last edits were formatting errors. >.> I am not one to leave sloppy spacing between paragraphs or formatting errors between subjects (Jutsu title and then to actual jutsu).

Also, I added the reason as to why the Divine Cross Technique gets it's name (From the lighting effect of the chakra which passes through the scroll in order to summon the elixir), for those of you who do not plan on looking. xD

Other than that, enjoy? o-o

Alright, since my fire element bloodline was accepted, I added a few minor details to the profile. Ojike is promising in his fire element techniques but now has a weakness to both water and ice style.

I have also taken the liberty of changing a few spelling errors that I didn't notice the first time. ^^ That's about it guys.