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Youji
Posts : 581
Type : Shoutakugakure
Rank : S-Rank
Elements : Ice, Wind, Blizzard
 |  Subject: Youji Weismuller Tue Sep 14, 2010 6:47 pm | |
| - Spoiler:
WEISMULLER,YOUJI
[spoiler] General InformationName: Youji Weismuller Nickname: Youji The Dead Doll Gender: Male Body Type: General Appearance. Despite his age Youji looks like more mature than some would think, He is five feet and nine inches tall and because he trains a lot he is rather light weighted having only one-hundred fifty-nine pounds. Someone that sees him would never guess that he is a puppet, he has a rather slim-built but he is still strong and in his free-time he trains. He has a light skin tone almost peach like and the skin he has was made to feel soft at touch, but it is still cold like the skin of a dead body. His orange hair is kept in a shaggy-way and he never brushes is, he just leaves it the way it is. The hair was made to be rather soft at touch and it barely reaches the top of his chin. His eyes always have a calm and worry-free expression. And the Aqua color they have makes you think of the sea if you stare too much at them Personality: Something rather interesting about Youji is his personality. Many people can actually say that he has a very strange personality that not many people can understand. He is always calm and collected rarely being disturbed by someone. He is friendly but don't expect to become friends with him. Nobody else than his master can so close to Youji. Despite his calm and friendly look Youji has a darker side hidden deep inside him that rarely comes out. This darker part of him usually appears when Youji is in a fight, if this part of him is unleashed he will start fighting more cruel then usual and will never stop until he is sure his opponent can’t move anymore or even kill his opponent. He cannot control that part of him. Youji is not so active all the time, he likes being lazy and sleeping when it’s warm outside and when it’s cold he is very active. When he is bored he always tries to find a good place to sleep and if he falls asleep good luck trying to wake him up. Other: - Spoiler:
Puppet Description: It is made to look exactly as you are now. Body type, skin color, everything is meant to make people believe that you are still human. But It goes beyond your normal abilities. It contains a massive amounts of dangerous needles specialized to enhance your control over them (Special alloy). Every joint has been made with a 360 degree ball joint allowing you to bend and move in unnatural ways. There, if looked closely, you would see a needle sized hole on each finger tip, even the thumbs. These small holes will allow you to eject very sharp and strong needles attached with wire thread, which is held in designated spots along the arm, or just as easily attach chakra threads."
As well as for an instant defense incase an opponent gets to close and somehow seems too much a waste of time, there are compartments located just above the elbow, knee joints as well as in the neck that contain a toxin the mistifies in contact with air. This is always regenerating as the toxin is made by a special bacteria. There is also semi-ejection points located on the knuckles and foot of the puppet. These can protrude poison tips needles to immobilize your opponent while using taijutsu. As well as causing more than just physical and internal bruising. The entire course of the puppets skin is enfused with a special alloy that gives it added strength and a nice ability to absorb and focus electricity as well as diamond dust for strength and endurence. This will make Lightning users less a threat as well as your lightning abilities more severe.
Then the last major part, is the synthetic muscle structure. This will allow your puppet to actual grow in strength over time. But it will take more severe training. The synthetics aren't as easily built as real muscles. But the end result could land you close to the amazing strength of Tsunade herself.
Instead of making one simple seal and hiding it inside the puppet in hopes it won't be found, I use many, many, many seals that all interlink with eachother. In doing this, no seal release technique can kill you, and you'll be able to regenerate back to this form as long as a piece of you the size of a pinky exists. The seal is so flawless, that it will even fool the Byakugan and Sharingan Eyes into thinking that the seal is just one seal instead of many. So, in essense, the only way to kill you is to destroy your entire body in one go.
Puppet special abilities:
Regeneration:
The seals that make the keep Youji's soul in the puppet can help him regenarate even from a single scrap.
Age: Unknown (looks 15) Height: 5'9" Weight: 159 lbs Likes: Hot & Cold Days Cats Blue Roses Silver Fighting Dislikes: Rainy Days Dogs Stupid people Repeating himself Food ~Bio~- Spoiler:
Childhood Arch
Youji was born in a normal family far away from a ninja village. He lived his life like any kid would have. But even so as the time passed he felt like his parents were hiding something from him and there was this room where he wasn't alloded to go in. He always wondered himself why is that and some day when his parents were not home he did what he wasn't allowded and looked in that room. What he found there? Well there he found many ninja weapons and two ninja headbands. When he asked his parents what was with those things they told him the whole story. When he heard that he wanted to be like his parents and become a ninja. At first they didn't want to let him go but seeing how much he wanted that they sended hiom to the Ninja Academy.
Academy Student Arch
At the age of 6 Youji managed to enter the academy, where he learned taijutsu and puppet fighting. He never liked ninjutsu or genjutsu. He was not bad at all and he always liked to cal the puppets his dolls, you'd never hear him call them puppets. As he trained and got good grades at school his parents where proud of him and so they saw it wasn't a bad idea to send him to the academy. At the age of 12 being the best in his class he absolved the academy and became genin, soon he was put in a good team and sometimes tooked missions by himself just to train harder. When he was in missions where he had to fight something his sensei saw that he was kinda cruel with them and fighting them too hard so he was kinda worried about that, that's why he keeped a close eye on him.
Chunnin & Jounin Arch
As time passed at the age of 13 he got promoted to chunnin because of his performance. He started taking more and more missions and especially guarding ones or the ones where he had to fight. As he was fighting more and more with puppets someone approached him and said he wanted to train him, the person who approached him was Surpentheon Fanglord, a sannin. He started his training with him and because of that he easily went Jounin at the age of 15 because of his skills
Puppet Boy Arch
As a present for him passing the Jounin test his sensei told him that he could merge his soul with the weapon he likes the most, puppets. When he heard that Youji immediatl;y accepted without thinking at what his parents could say. He went with him in a journey to a deserted village where he had been kage there. Undeground there was a secret place and you could only get there via a jutsu. After the transformation he explained him about his new powers and that if he ever wished to change his new body in anyway, he'd have to wait for his sensei to do it as he is the only one capable of performing maintenence. The last thing that was said to him before getting out of there was that he had to cut all his bonds with everyone in the village, Youji missunderstood this and so he went in the village and started killing people and even his parents. After he killed everyone in the village he started connecting them with wires and then hanged them on trees to look like they are still alive and standing. Since then nobody ever heard of him anymore. As he was
Ninja InformationVillage: Shoutakugakure Rank: S-Rank Elements: Ice, Wind, Blizzard (Combination Element) Jutsu: - Spoiler:
Name: Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Style: Ninjutsu
Type: Supplementary
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and their intended destination.
Name: Leaf Gale
Rank: D
Style: Taijutsu
Type: Offensive
Description: The user performs a low, circular kick to sweep the opponent off their feet.
Name: Leaf Whirlwind
Rank: D
Style: Taijutsu
Type: Offensive
Description: This technique involves a powerful leap forward followed by a spinning kick with both legs in succession, the second kick being aimed lower in case the intended target ducks the first
Name: Elemental Booster
Rank: D
Style: Ninjutsu
Type: Supplementary
Description: This jutsu offers the user to boost an attack or jutsu with any element he has already mastered with a non-elemental attack or to strengthen another elemental attack
Name: 100% Punch
Rank: D
Style: Taijutsu
Type: Offensive
Description: The user gathers large amounts of chakra to his/her hand and a releases punch at the opponent, causing severe damage.
Name: See Me Or Not
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: He runs towards (or other ways) his opponent in a very quick speed that will make the opponent cant see him. He then will try to stab the oppenent with scissor in the eyes
Name: The Replacing Doll
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: This technique can save Youji from getting hit from weak attacks from her opponent by the help of his dolls appearing infront him and take the hit
Name: All Seeing Eye
Rank: C
Style: Ninjutsu
Type: Supplementary
Description: Seals from the user’s body create what looks to be like a giant eyeball up in the sky overlooking the battle field. What the enemy doesn’t know is this eye is actually a summoning. It is an All-Seeing-Eye that can literally see everything going on the battlefield. Whatever the eye sees, it is able to telepathically tell the user what it’s seeing and what to do. [Ex: If the enemy is hiding in a tree, the eye tells the user this so he/she can blow the tree up.]
Name: Me or The Clone
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: A Clone doll of himself appears around the oppenent. Himself and the clones are running around in the circle laughing and giggling playing around with the opponent, either him or the clone will throw out a needle at the opponent or maybe all of them throw out the needle it can make the opponent numb and cant move for a moment
Name: The Voices Of Dolls
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: He takes 5 dolls out making them close to his body size . The dolls will move around the opponent and the dolls will laugh, giggling and say something in creepy voices that can be a pain in the opponent's ears
Name: Arhat Fist
Rank: C
Style: Taijutsu
Type: Offensive, Collaboration
Description: This style of combat focuses on simple physical attacks augmented with the jutsu Elemental Booster. Using simple palm strikes, shoulder thrusts, knee strikes, and punches, the user can easily defeat an opponent.
Moves
Rising Knee (昇膝, Shōshitsu): The user strikes his opponent with an upward thrust of his knee.
Thrusting Shoulder (突肩, Tokken): The user strikes his opponent with his shoulder.
Crumbling Palm (崩掌, Hōshō): The user strikes his opponent with a forward palm thrust.
Upwards Attacking Palm (昇撃掌, Shōgekishō): The user strikes his opponent with an upwards palm thrust.
Pressure Palm (圧掌, Asshō): The user strikes his opponent with an downwards palm thrust.
Rock Attack (岩撃, Gangeki): The user punches his opponent.
Name: Mess With The Puppets
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: He controls one (or more) of the puppet that he has, making it alive and attack his opponent with it. The puppet has a weapon and shield in its body so it can be use anytime when he wants
Name: Thousands Of Needles
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: Before the opponent attacks him, he will use his needles to protect himself .The needles will appear around him in a swirling wind covering around his body in a ball shape. It will be hard to attack him because the needles are like a metal but also like a mirror that reflect the attack back to the opponent
Name: The Needles
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: He shoots out hundreds of needles with no wires at his opponent . If the needles hit the opponent more than 3 he/she might feel dizzy a little . It will make the opponent see Him like theres a 8 or more clone appearing .The oppenent should find out which is the real him and which is just the illusion if he/she failed he/she may get defeated by the next turn if Youji attack
Name: Blocking Technique Absorption Seal
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Description: A highly advanced sealing technique that is capable of absorbing any chakra, regardless of any shape or nature transformation, and dispersing it within one's body by spinning the chakra within one's body in the opposite direction. As a result, this technique can absorb any ninjutsu based technique, regardless of power, without harming the user.
Should the user get close enough to grab the opponent, the barrier can absorb chakra right out of an individual's body, effectively draining them (similar to the Chakra Absorption Technique).
Name: Black Secret Technique: Dark Soldier Marionette
Rank: A
Style: Puppet Jutsu
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Description: These ten puppets wear black cloaks, black pants, and black combat boots, giving this jutsu its name. They are also made of a hard, durable metal that can withstand most attacks. Some of these puppet's designs and weapons are similar to Chiyo's and Sasori's puppets. All the puppets he uses can shoot either a poison smoke bomb or a cloud of poison from their mouths and each puppet hass a different purpose.
Puppet One: This puppet has almost feet long white hair, triangular eyes, and poison laced claws. This puppet is used in conjunction with puppets 1 and 2 to use the Three Buddhist Treasures Vacuum Destruction. This puppet has the "Buddha" mark imprinted in its chest. These three puppets have wind natured chakra infused inside them to give their chakra more cutting power.
Puppet Two: This puppet has a brown ponytail, triangular eyes, and poison laced claws. This puppet holds the "Acts" seal.
Puppet Three: This puppet has spiky black hair, triangular eyes, and poison laced claws. This puppet holds the "Priest" seal.
Puppet Four: This puppet looks similar to a samurai, including a japanese sun hat. This puppet is a twin puppet with puppet five. He has a square mouth, a left poison laced claw, and red skin. His right hand is a gigantic buster blade. This puppet syncs up with puppet five to create chakra strings between their hands. These strings are powerful enough to cut through stone.
Puppet Five: This puppet has a square mouth, a right poison laced claws, and blue skin. His left hand is a three blade scythe.
Puppet Six: This is a bald puppet that looks similar to a demon, with an evil frown and square eyes. He has two demon horns, two shoulder spikes, and two palm spikes, all laced with poison. This puppet's function is similar to a porcupine. He has smaller spikes that run down the sides of his arms, legs, and down his back. He can shoot out these spikes in an instant.
Puppet Seven: This puppet is shaped like a giant bowling ball with blue tendrils for hair and two shields that run down his back. He is used mostly as a defensive puppet, to protect the user. He can shoot fin shaped poison spikes from the top, bottom, and two sides of his arms. His entire mid section can open up to trap an opponent in and then shoot poison laced spikes from all directions. This puppet can flatten out his hair, unravel and flatten out his arms and legs and move the shields to his side to become and impenitrable fortress.
Puppet Eight: This puppet looks like a spider, with three eyes, a gigantic jaw, and ratty, gray hair. This puppet is used mostly as a long range attacker, with almost all of his weapons extending to incredible lengths. He has six arms with long poison claws, a scorpion tail (like Hiruko's), four Demon Wind Shuriken attached to wires that come out of his back, and a drill attached to a thick wire that comes out of a chest comparment.
Puppet Nine: This puppet looks like a little kid with spiky, long purple hair. He has two cannons in his palms. This puppet holds six scrolls in his back that lets him use the wind element. He can shoot he can shoot high pressurized air from his arms.
Puppet Ten:
This puppet is a massive, bald man. He has spiked knees, fists, and feet. He can use superhman strength in battle, along with projectile hands and multiple chains from his palms.
Name: The Death Minute Into Human Puppets
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: He shoots out a dark glowing thrills out from his fingers with a needles wrapping around the enemy's body and pulling his/her body apart (like head,arms,legs etc)making him/her feel the hurt and die slowly screaming in pain. After tearing them apart he moves his fingers controlling the needles stitching the body parts back in place and make it as his doll collection or call as zombie. This Technique can be escape by the opponent if he/she knows the way out
Name: Death Cocoon
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: He shoots out the wires controlling it with his finger , make it twirling around like a hurricane and covering up around the opponent's body like a cocoon in few seconds . The opponent cant breathe and if more horrible he will spread her arms pulling the thrills more tight, it squash the opponent's body,and cutting the skins like blending it and breaks down the bones into pieces.If he/she doesnt have a way to get out
Bloodline: None Clan: None Personal InformationHabits:★ Sleeping when his bored ★ Drawing with the blood of his victim on the ground ★ Continuos training for hours or even days Weaknesses:★ The tendancy to react quickly in anger ★ He is weak in long range fights ★ Sometimes going into a state of insanity ★ Claustrophobia Strengths: ☆ Speed ☆ Strength ☆ Flexibility ☆ Quick Reaction ☆ Good Problem Solver Fears:Fire Termites (Not joking) Losing his Master
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| | | | Yakate
Council of Four
Posts : 1347
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Elements : Depends
| | Subject: Re: Youji Weismuller Wed Sep 15, 2010 2:33 am | |
| Accepted, I guess, but Surp still needs to post his approval. :3 | |
| | | | Surpentheon Fanglord
Role Play Moderator
Posts : 929
Type : Forsaken
Rank : Grand Sannin/Sage/Ex-Kage
Elements : Lightning (Most often)
| | Subject: Re: Youji Weismuller Wed Sep 15, 2010 6:30 pm | |
| Approved. But it is to be known that noone knows who made Youji into a puppet. Therefore, noone knows who his master is. There is reason for this. ^^ Okay, have fun. | |
| | | | Youji
Posts : 581
Type : Shoutakugakure
Rank : S-Rank
Elements : Ice, Wind, Blizzard
| | Subject: Re: Youji Weismuller Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:32 pm | |
| added the jutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Black Secret Technique: Dark Soldier Marionette
Rank: You decide
Style: Puppet Jutsu
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Description: These ten puppets wear black cloaks, black pants, and black combat boots, giving this jutsu its name. They are also made of a hard, durable metal that can withstand most attacks. Some of these puppet's designs and weapons are similar to Chiyo's and Sasori's puppets. Youji has the seals to summon this puppets on his arms and the chakra cords come out from the seal too so Youji can fight too while controlling the puppets All the puppets he uses can shoot either a poison smoke bomb or a cloud of poison from their mouths and each puppet hass a different purpose. They have unlimited poison cause just like Youji himself they have a bacteria that creates it.
Puppet One: This puppet has almost feet long white hair, triangular eyes, and poison laced claws. This puppet is used in conjunction with puppets 1 and 2 to use the Three Buddhist Treasures Vacuum Destruction. This puppet has the "Buddha" mark imprinted in its chest. These three puppets have wind natured chakra infused inside them to give their chakra more cutting power.
Puppet Two: This puppet has a brown ponytail, triangular eyes, and poison laced claws. This puppet holds the "Acts" mark.
Puppet Three: This puppet has spiky black hair, triangular eyes, and poison laced claws. This puppet holds the "Priest" mark.
Puppet Four: This puppet looks similar to a samurai, including a japanese sun hat. This puppet is a twin puppet with puppet five. He has a square mouth, a left poison laced claw, and red skin. His right hand is a gigantic buster blade. This puppet syncs up with puppet five to create chakra strings between their hands. These strings are powerful enough to cut through stone.
Puppet Five: This puppet has a square mouth, a right poison laced claws, and blue skin. His left hand is a three blade scythe.
Puppet Six: This is a bald puppet that looks similar to a demon, with an evil frown and square eyes. He has two demon horns, two shoulder spikes, and two palm spikes, all laced with poison. This puppet's function is similar to a porcupine. He has smaller spikes that run down the sides of his arms, legs, and down his back. He can shoot out these spikes in an instant.
Puppet Seven: This puppet is shaped like a giant bowling ball with blue tendrils for hair and two shields that run down his back. He is used mostly as a defensive puppet, to protect the user. He can shoot fin shaped poison spikes from the top, bottom, and two sides of his arms. His entire mid section can open up to trap an opponent in and then shoot poison laced spikes from all directions. This puppet can flatten out his hair, unravel and flatten out his arms and legs and move the shields to his side to become and impenitrable fortress.
Puppet Eight: This puppet looks like a spider, with three eyes, a gigantic jaw, and ratty, gray hair. This puppet is used mostly as a long range attacker, with almost all of his weapons extending to incredible lengths. He has six arms with long poison claws, a scorpion tail (like Hiruko's), four Demon Wind Shuriken attached to wires that come out of his back, and a drill attached to a thick wire that comes out of a chest comparment.
Puppet Nine: This puppet looks like a little kid with spiky, long purple hair. He has two cannons in his palms. This puppet holds six scrolls in his back that lets him use the wind element. He can shoot he can shoot high pressurized air from his arms.
Puppet Ten:
This puppet is a massive, bald man. He has spiked knees, fists, and feet. He can use superhman strength (Tsunade-Like) in battle, along with projectile hands and multiple chains from his palms.
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| | | | Xiao-Xiao Sêdo
Jounin
Posts : 255
Rank : Jonin
Elements : Bloodline = Earth and Storm; Main = Lightning and Water
| | Subject: Re: Youji Weismuller Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:45 pm | |
| Be creative/original. This is lady Chio's puppet master jutsu almost word-for-word, and if it's not it is still wayyy to similar. Sorry. Dis-approved. | |
| | | | Youji
Posts : 581
Type : Shoutakugakure
Rank : S-Rank
Elements : Ice, Wind, Blizzard
| | Subject: Re: Youji Weismuller Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:52 pm | |
| Xiao this is Chyo's jutsu and look at mine compare them and you'll see they are very different - Spoiler:
These puppets are very powerful, as Chiyo claimed that she had destroyed a castle with them, and that afterwards she had sworn to never use them again. With this puppet collection it is literally possible to use "one puppet with each finger," each of them boasting a great amount of power. However, in order to use all of their secret mechanisms demands extremely high class expertise and skill. The Chikamatsu Collection has terrifying prowess in taijutsu, ninjutsu, projectile weapons, and so on. Furthermore, as they can change their numbers by combining, the number of abilities they can show becomes even greater. They were capable of countering Sasori's Red Secret Technique: Performance of a Hundred Puppets, due in great part to their ability to work together.
This puppet somewhat resembled an "oni" (demon). Although it possessed no weapons, its striking power was immense. This puppet primarily used its large fists as a means to fend off attackers. It always kept closer to Chiyo in case it was needed as defense.
This puppet was able to extend its arms to form a sort of cage, where it would then launch bombs from its mouth. Since the explosion was accurate and very small, it dealt a great amount of damage to enemies whilst not damaging the cage. This puppet was also proficient at taijutsu.
This puppet had one eye, and was capable of releasing an orb from its mouth used for the Sealing Technique: Lion Closing Roar.
This puppet had spiky hair, and held the mark of "Buddha" (仏, Butsu) in its mouth which activated Three Buddhist Treasures Vacuum Destruction technique when used in conjunction with puppets #6 and #8. Three Buddhist Treasures Vacuum Destruction is a technique where puppets #4, #6, and #8 formed a pyramid with a small space at the center. Prior to activation, Chiyo and the three puppets would form a seal that would then open a powerful vacuum that would suck in anything in front of the technique. However, the vacuum was prone to overloading, thus leaving the three puppets vulnerable.
A red puppet that works together with puppet #9. It is able to lift its face to reveal a spinning orb with four chakra blades. Since these blades are made of chakra and spin rapidly, even a scrape can prove deadly.
This puppet held a "Dharma" (法, Hō) seal in its mouth, and worked with puppets #4 and #8 to activate Three Buddhist Treasures Vacuum Destruction technique.
This puppet resembled a girl with red hair tied into buns. It wielded two large swords that were capable of cleaving through enemies with ease, although the sheer magnitude of the weapons reduced the puppet's dexterity. Puppet #7 was the main attacker, and could fend off even the strongest of enemies at an alarming rate.
This puppet held the "Sangha" (僧, Sō) seal, and worked in conjunction with puppets #4 and #6 to activate Three Buddhist Treasures Vacuum Destruction.
A puppet with long black hair. It works in conjunction with puppet #5. Puppet #9 is able to extend its hand via a chain link before connecting with puppet #5 to hurl it around, thus being able to slice mid-ranged to close-ranged targets quickly and effectively. However, if #9 were to be destroyed, #5 would become vulnerable.
A bald puppet with large holes in its skull. This puppet's hidden weapons are the long extending cords coiled in its skull that can pierce numerous enemies at a time. Since the range is very long, it can pierce distant targets without even getting close. Also, it is able to latch onto opponents with its cords and then crumble them slowly. Puppet #10 can also use its hands and legs to fight, but lacks physical power.
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| | | | Xiao-Xiao Sêdo
Jounin
Posts : 255
Rank : Jonin
Elements : Bloodline = Earth and Storm; Main = Lightning and Water
| | Subject: Re: Youji Weismuller Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:55 pm | |
| Same techs, same weapon (deamon shuriken or w.e.) same samurai.....SAME. No approval >.<; | |
| | | | Youji
Posts : 581
Type : Shoutakugakure
Rank : S-Rank
Elements : Ice, Wind, Blizzard
| | Subject: Re: Youji Weismuller Sun Sep 19, 2010 3:04 pm | |
| Soryy Xiao but i can find the "wayyy to similar" part except for the first 3 puppets | |
| | | | Youji
Posts : 581
Type : Shoutakugakure
Rank : S-Rank
Elements : Ice, Wind, Blizzard
| | Subject: Re: Youji Weismuller Sun Sep 19, 2010 6:17 pm | |
| okay me and Ici edited the justus and this is the final form - Spoiler:
Name: Dark Soldier Marionette
Rank: A
Style: Puppet Jutsu
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Description: These eight puppets wear black cloaks, black pants, and black combat boots, giving this jutsu its name. They are also made of a hard, durable metal that can withstand most attacks. Youji has the seals to summon this puppets on his arms and the chakra cords come out from the seal too so Youji can fight too while controlling the puppets All the puppets he uses can shoot either a poison smoke bomb or a cloud of poison from their mouths and each puppet has a different purpose. They have unlimited poison cause just like Youji himself they have a bacteria that creates it.
Puppet One: This puppet has red spikey hair and wears gauntlets covered in poison. This puppet is used in conjunction with puppets 2, 3, and 4 to use the Tornado Destruction Technique. These 4 puppets are of the wind element.
Puppet Two: This puppet has blue hair cut back behind its ears and has red eyes. This puppet has it’s arms made out of a special alloy that absorbs chakra from what it touches and sends it to the user via the chakra cord.
Puppet Three: This puppet had white hair and can shoot needles tipped in poison from it’s palms.
Puppet Four: This puppet is perhaps the biggest of the eight. It is 8 feet tall and weighs nearly 500 pounds. It carries an axe of a reddish color from the blood of the people slain.
Puppet Five: This puppet looks like a little kid with spiky, long purple hair. He has two cannons in his palms. This puppet holds six scrolls in his back that lets him use the wind element. He can shoot he can shoot high pressurized air from his arms.
Puppet Six: This is a bald puppet that looks similar to a demon, with an evil frown and square eyes. He has two demon horns, two shoulder spikes, and two palm spikes, all laced with poison. This puppet's function is similar to a porcupine. He has smaller spikes that run down the sides of his arms, legs, and down his back. He can shoot out these spikes in an instant.
Puppet Seven: This puppet is shaped like a giant bowling ball with blue tendrils for hair and two shields that run down his back. He is used mostly as a defensive puppet, to protect the user. He can shoot fin shaped poison spikes from the top, bottom, and two sides of his arms. His entire mid section can open up to trap an opponent in and then shoot poison laced spikes from all directions. This puppet can flatten out his hair, unravel and flatten out his arms and legs and move the shields to his side to become and impenitrable fortress. This puppet’s main weapon is giving off a poisonous gas that won’t harm the user, but will kill anything alive within 30 yards.
Puppet Eight: This puppet looks like a spider, with three eyes, a gigantic jaw, and ratty, gray hair. This puppet is used mostly as a long range attacker, with almost all of his weapons extending to incredible lengths. He has six arms with long poison claws, a scorpion tail (like Hiruko's), four Demon Wind Shuriken attached to wires that come out of his back, and a drill attached to a thick wire that comes out of a chest comparment.
Combined Technique:
Name: Tornado Destruction Technique
Rank: S
Style: Ninjutsu
Type: Offensive
Description: Puppets 1-4 combine into a 12 foot monster. This machine of sorts is shaped kind of like a giant cone, but it spins very very violently. When it starts to spin, it creates a tornado on the battlefield, sucking everything (except the user) into it's clutches. Once swept up into the tornado, the puppets excrete a deadly poison that will kill in seconds. The person traped in this tornado even has it’s chakra absorbed and sended to Youji until the tornado ends or the person escapes. From the outside of the tornado, the puppets shoot needles all around the battlefield, making this a very hard move to dodge.
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| | Subject: Re: Youji Weismuller Sun Sep 19, 2010 6:26 pm | |
| I went through and changed the puppets substantially. There are now 8 instead of 10 puppets, and each plays a different role. The only similarity you'll probably find is that puppet 7 is a defensive puppet. These are now completely different from Chiyo's puppets. If there is still an issue, bring it up with me.
On a side note, Youji DOES have to post a creation or finding of these puppets and must post to learn the new jutsu, but none of these are like Chiyo's so I don't want to hear any more about copying word-for-word. | |
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