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Posts : 210 Type : Rouge Rank : Unknown Elements : Fire, Lightning,Wind
| Subject: Neo Yurizaki Thu Jan 13, 2011 1:52 pm | |
| Yurizaki,Neo
General Information Name:Neo Yurizaki
Nickname: None
Gender: Male
Body Type:Average height and ripped having mass amounts of muscle tonned so well he looks almost just skinny!
General Appearance.Neo has changing eye color depending on his mood!It is naturally a hazzy purple color, but if he gets mad it turns to a really bright baby blue along with his hair going into a spikey blond hair style even tho his hair naturally jet black and is like a bed head hair stlye.When using his Raikou Shintekigan, his eyes turn a bright yellow greenish color. When he gets to that point of being mad he will also get alittle pailer even tho his blood is moving fast throught his veins with an accelerated rate of adrenaline.He wears a long black coat that goes down to his ankles with many kunai hidden throught out the whole thing.He wears a white long sleeve "school boy" shirt that is left open with a black vest under that, he has black straight jeans that are deffinatly not tight but not too baggy with a leather rope holding his pants up.His boots are thick leather with a 1/2 inch of titanium lining the whole thing with sheet on the bottom with little spikes on the bottom, along with gloves with the fingers cut off with a piece of metal on the top part of the actual hand.Neo has a very large tatoo on his back along with two on his wrist.There are also two very similiar tatoos on all 4 sides of his abdomen.
Personality: :Neo is a driven young man to show his clan is one to be known and feared. He is usally a cool headed and can size up a situation type of a person. He is cocky, and walks wit his chest out and always has his guard up. But there is a really terrifying side to Neo.If Neo gets mad he seems to just turn into a total different person that has unimaginal brute force and speed that would rival anyone's. It looks like his body is takin over and is incased in lightning giving him crazy amount of speed and strenght.
Other:
Age:17
Height: 5' 10'' Weight: 163 pounds
Likes: strong apponents, talented woman, people that follow orders well, nice landscapes, quietness
Dislikes: cocky people wit no reason to be that way, loyal ninjas to there villages, noisy/talkative people
~Bio~
His father was Saru that impregnanted a young shinobi woman of a unknown backround, but before she could give birth naturally he ripped the baby out of her. He was named Neo Yurizaki as it was saw that the baby was more like his dad then anything, and inherited his doujutsu, the Yurizaki's Shintekigan. He studied under his and learned all his ninjutsu, taijutsu, kenjutsu, and Fūinjutsu. After Neo taught he had learned all he could, while his father was sleeping, he slit his throath and took out his eyes and took them with him. After Neo burned his father's body with a intense fire that disinagrated the entire body. Neo belived the yurizaki was too great to be kept behind the scenes of the world and wanted to bring it out into the open. Neo is now a rouge after a short time in the Aurora Village with unknown circumstances he left roaming the world as a rouge! He consideres everyone lesser then him and never really truly goes all out but can still size up a situation! But Neo has a unknown power, he naturally produce lightning/ electricity. All human body produce electricity but like an eel Neo has the ability to create an abnormal amount for his body. But if he creates too much he will become weak and get extremely light headed. Even more weird his naturally a fire release user.
Ninja Information Village:none
Rank: Unknown
Elements: Fire, Lightning, wind
Jutsu: To be posted
Weapons:
1x Kusarigama-with a sickle on one end of a 10 ft chain and then a steel ball on the other end of the chain, usually on his waist
1xReiki Nihonto- a sword that can split into two down the middle, the blade is unique tho that it gathers iron from the blood it comes into contact with and heals itself. Usually in it's holder on his back.[/list]
Equipment:
12x Kunai 12x shuriken 2xSmoke grenades 1xset of Caltropes 5xSenbon needles
Bloodline: Raikou Shintekigan
Clan: Yurizaki
Personal Information Habits: sizes up a person, underestimates people, looks up at the sky
Weaknesses: underestimates people, alittle too cocky sometimes, Gets bored easily, Trys to finish things fast/ impatience
Strengths: Speed, can usually accurately size people up, uses the environment to his advantage
Fears: a miserable defeat, Failing his goal of showing the Yurizaki's true strength, Being broke
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| | | Neo Yurizaki Global Moderator
Posts : 210 Type : Rouge Rank : Unknown Elements : Fire, Lightning,Wind
| Subject: Re: Neo Yurizaki Thu Jan 13, 2011 1:54 pm | |
| Summonings: Tok Team:A team of different types of ninja dogs that can be summoned at once! - A panther(Tok Sum Bong)
- a rottwieler(Tok Non)
- a pug (Tok Yun)
Tok Sum Bong: a panther that has been a loyal and life long subject, with heightened animal scenes and the ability to communicate with Neo Tokky: a small bat only Neo can communicate with and with it's sonar screech is a excellent for reconnaissance and finding enemies anywhere | |
| | | Haku Shasa Council of Four
Posts : 841 Rank : Genin Elements : Water
| Subject: Re: Neo Yurizaki Thu Jan 13, 2011 5:11 pm | |
| Approved unless any other mod says so. | |
| | | Neo Yurizaki Global Moderator
Posts : 210 Type : Rouge Rank : Unknown Elements : Fire, Lightning,Wind
| Subject: Re: Neo Yurizaki Thu Jan 13, 2011 5:35 pm | |
| Fire Jutsu:
Neo Flamer Rank:A Range:Short-Mid Range Style:Fire,ninjutsu Description:The user takes in a deep breath and blows out infusing fire chakra sending out an intense flame,the user is said to resemble a flame thrower. Neo has renamed it becasue he has masterd this technique so much that the fire actually turns white.
Fire Release: Dragon's flame Rank:A Elements:Fire Range:0m- 15 meters Effects:This jutsu makes the user's mouth much like a flamethrower, but since I have been using this jutsu so much I have made the range farther and wider with hotter fire,white fire which is the secound hottest known to man.
Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique Rank:A Elements:Fire Range:0m-25 meters Effects: The user inhales air and, gather up chakra in their chest, then spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally.
Fire Release: Fire Expansion Rank:A Elements:Fire Range:0m- 5 meters Effects:The user creates a fire ball infront of himself/herself infused quiet a bit of chakra. The user then spits the ball at where wished and then on impact the ball expands taking over a 5 meters area burning everything much like a magma ball.
Katon: Honoo Sude [Fire Release: Blazing Hands] Rank: A Requirements: None. Description: After the user performs the necessary hand seals, their hands heat up and then burst into flames. The flames do not harm the user, but provide a great advantage at hand to hand combat, and is quite useful in nature.
Katon: Karyuu Endan [Flame Release: Fire Wall Attack] Rank: A Requirements: None. Description: A Katon ninjutsu technique where the ninja inhales deeply, drawing in a full chest of air. They then exhale, producing a very wide stream of flames that approach their target as a huge wall. This technique however uses an extremely substantial amount of the user's chakra and cannot be used frequently.
Katon: Hibashiri [Flame Release: Running Fire] Rank: B Requirements: None. Description: Having finished the required handseals, the user directs his chakra with a kick. As a result, a wheel of fire is created and darts across the terrain towards the opponent at great speed.
Katon: Houka [Fire Release: Rocket] Rank: B Requirements: None. Description: After performing the needed handseals, the user would open their mouth a ball of fire will shoot out their mouth with great speed and will burst into a bigger flame when it hits the target.
Ryuusei Sutoraiku [Meteor Strike] Rank: B Requirement: Appropriate strength. Description: The user hurls a boulder into the air and jumps up after it performing the right hand seals. The user then grabs the boulder in mid-air and, through Katon manipulation, covers it with fire creating a blazing meteor to attack with, which could also be blown up into a gush of small flaming rocks.
Shishienjin [Four Violet Flames Battle Encampment] Rank: B Requirements: Four Users. Description: This jutsu creates a box-like barrier around an area defined by the four users of it. Anything that touches with barrier will burst into purple flame. As long as the users of the jutsu remain active and unharmed, this barrier can never be broken.
Katon: Boukaheki no Jutsu [Fire Release: Fire Wall Technique] Rank: C Requirements: None. Description: By performing a few seals, the user can exhale a steady stream of fire creating a wall in front of them and partially surrounding them. It's capable of evaporating water and low level Suiton jutsus, and used as a great defense against physical strikes.
Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu [Fire Release: Powerful Fireball Technique] Rank: C Requirements: None. Description: After using handseals, the user must first gather chakra into his hand and mouth. The mouth then shoots out fire and one hand is placed just out of the lips to control it into one intensely hot fireball. This attack is similar to a huge devastating flamethrower.
Katon: Housenka no Jutsu [Fire Release: Mythical Fire Flower Technique] Rank: C Requirements: None. Description: This Katon ninjutsu is a very flexible technique. Housenka begins with creating many small fireballs from the user's mouth, and shooting them at a single or multiple opponents in one strike. These projectiles either can be shot either fast in the same direction, or slow in a rotating formation. Basically, the ninja controls everything, from the strength, and path of the fireballs (Relatively), to the speed they travel towards the target.
Katon: Jiraigen [Fire Release: Minefield] Rank: C Requirements: None Description: After several handseals, the user will place his or her hand on the ground. Wherever the user touches with his or her hand, a bit of their chakra is left behind. Should any object touch the ground within a close range of the mines, the area will detonate into a small explosion. The user can maximally place five mines per use of this jutsu.
Katon: Kasai no Ame [Fire Release: Rain of Fire Technique] Rank: C Requirements: None. Description: This is a jutsu utilizing the fire element. The user performs a few seals and begins concentrating chakra into his hands. Eventually he will manipulate it into a ball of fire completely surrounding both hands, and then fired into the air. The two fireballs will collide and then split into 10-20 separate fireballs which will proceed to rain down on the area as commanded by the user.
Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Technique Rank:D Elements:Fire Range:0m- 5 meters Effects:This jutsu sends multiple balls of fire at a target. It is also possible to hide shuriken within the fireballs, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. For the most part, however, this jutsu is used as a distraction.
Flamming Shuriken Dance Rank:D Elements:Fire Range:0m-20 meters Effects:Either the user or somelse throws shuriken and the user lights them one fire making the opponent belive that they are just fireballs.
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| | | Neo Yurizaki Global Moderator
Posts : 210 Type : Rouge Rank : Unknown Elements : Fire, Lightning,Wind
| Subject: Re: Neo Yurizaki Thu Jan 13, 2011 5:48 pm | |
| Wind Jutsu:
Futon Kage Bunshin Rank:B Elements:Wind Range:0m-20meters Effects:The user creates a clone or kage bunshin and infuse it with quite a good deal with of wind chakra and when this clone is hit or takes any damage it explodes and the wind is so strong it can easily knock you off your feet and can cut very deep depending on how close the clone is to you and how much chakra the user infuses into it.
Vortex ball Rank:A Element:wind Range:1m-2m Time:One round to prepare Effects: The user emits a very strong concentrated amount of wind chakra around him and starts to make it turn and swirls around him.This will easily cut flesh and bone if hit and will slice up any metal that is as strong or weaker then steel.Also anyone within a 1 meter of the sphere will begins to get the small cuts allover there body and probally blown away. The user of wind can take the ball and throw it, it will go slow but very destructive so usually only used to hit a target not easily moved.
Wind tunnel vortex Rank: A Element:wind Range:0m-3 meters Time:Can only be used for three rounds Effects:The user creates a circle of spining wind and with this wind goes throught the middle which ever way the user chooses. The vortex can be pointed anywhere but must be close to the user. The wind can either be pulled having a suction stronger then most twisters. You can also push very easily knocking anyone off there feet and has extreme power.
Wind blade Rank:C Element:Wind Range:0m-1 meters Effects:The user makes a tiger seal and releases wind chakra into the air and begins forming it to cut better then any tool or object.
Wind Release: Pressure Release Rank:A Element:Wind Range:0m-25meters Effects:The user uses both hands to make a compressive ball of wind chakra much like a rasengan,but then u release it and it begins cutting everything in a 15m but pushes everything in a 25 meters.
Wind Release: Wind Sleeve Rank:D Elements:Wind Range:0m-3 meters Effects:The users sends a gust of wind out his sleeves that has a decent amount amount of pressure.
Wind Release: Wrist Sythes Rank:A Elements:Wind Range:0m-1/2 meter Effects:The user emits a very steady stream of wind chakra creating two fan like sythes on either sides of the user's wrist.With this the blades are sharper then any blade even possible being able to be made and can also make the two spin,change two into one long one on each hand.
Last edited by Neo Yurizaki on Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:43 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Editing for approval) | |
| | | Haku Shasa Council of Four
Posts : 841 Rank : Genin Elements : Water
| Subject: Re: Neo Yurizaki Thu Jan 13, 2011 7:03 pm | |
| Go back thou and put any that's name of actual rank and put the e/d/ so on for those before I look anymore | |
| | | Neo Yurizaki Global Moderator
Posts : 210 Type : Rouge Rank : Unknown Elements : Fire, Lightning,Wind
| Subject: Re: Neo Yurizaki Sat Jan 15, 2011 1:02 pm | |
| Lightning Jutsu:
Lightning Release Armor Rank:S Range:Short Style:Lightning,ninjutsu,Defensive Description:Wrapping his body in a layer of Lightning chakra, the Neo can electrically stimulate his nervous system and speed up his neural synapses to react faster to danger and push his physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. While using this technique, his reflexes are comparable to that of Konoha's Yellow Flash, making it difficult, if not impossible, even for the Sharingan to keep up with him.
Nervous Nerves Rank:S Range:Short Style:Lightning,Medical ninjutsu Preparation time: 1 post prior to use Description:Neo touches the opponent and sends a very intense shock of lightning through there nervous system, causing the body to recognise certain body parts as other parts.Like tryingto move your pinky might casue you to move your neck!
Lightning Thunder Combo Rank:S Range:Short Style:Lightning,ninjutsu,Taijutsu Description:Neo runs or flickers in the vicinity of the opponent and shocks the floor slightly numbing the opponent's feet or atleast slow down there refelx to jump away.Neo then flips forward on the his hand.Then pushing off his hands into the air and spinning his body so he can round house kick the enemy in the jaw.
Lightning Ball Rank:B Range:short-long range Style:Lightning,Ninjutsu Description:Neo charges a compressed ball of lightning if need be one in each hand.After he is done charging and compressing it he can send it flying around 10 yards away and does 2 feet explosion of electricity that is fatal, 3 feet away from the explosion you might feel slight numbness/paralysis.
Lightning Release Shadow Clone Rank:B Range:Short-mid range Style:Lightning,ninjutsu Description:This technique allows the user to make a shadow clone infused with lightning. Because it is a shadow clone, it is able to perform jutsu and interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. If the clone is injured, it will revert to its natural lightning-state, at the same time electrocuting whatever it is touching.
Lightning Destruction Rank:C Range:short-medium range Style:Lightning,ninjutsu Description:Neo places his hand on the ground and generates a lightning bolt in the ground and sends it towards the enemy.The bolt will crack and start shatter and crack making a very rigid small mountaious area.This jutsu is good for retreats and to stop a charge. | |
| | | Neo Yurizaki Global Moderator
Posts : 210 Type : Rouge Rank : Unknown Elements : Fire, Lightning,Wind
| Subject: Re: Neo Yurizaki Sat Jan 15, 2011 1:04 pm | |
| Supplementary:
Five Prong Seal Rank:A Range:Short Range-arms length Style:Fūinjutsu Description:The user causes chakra to come to his fingertips and when the user comes in contact with another the jutsu produces a powerful seal that is used to block or disturb the flow of chakra in a target. Once the seal is completed, the target will become unconscious and unable to fight for a short time.
Five Prong Release Rank:A Range:Short Range-Arms length Style:Fūinjutsu Description:This jutsu is used to remove seals of up to equal power, like the Five Elements Seal.
Elemental concentration Rank:C Range:Short Style:Elemental,Ninjutsu Description:The user covers himself in a chosen elemental chakra by letting out the chakra through all you pores and receives protection and strength that each element provides.
Body Flicker Rank:D Range:Short-Long Range Style:Supplementary,ninjutsu Description:This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalize the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and their intended destination.
Elemental Wipes Rank:D Range:Short-Mid Range Style:Elemental,ninjutsu Description:The user creates a wipe approx 7 feet of a selective element coming out of the users hand.(Ex.fire wipe, lightning wipe, wind wipe) The wipe does selective damage of the element.(Ex.Wind=sharp cut, lightning=paralysis and shocks)
Summoning Technique Rank:D Range:Short Range Style:Fūinjutsu Description:The user usually must have a blood offering by cutting/biting themselfves and have there blood in there palm before preforming the hand seals and slamming there hand on the floor summoning what ever the are suppossed to summon.
Reverse Summoning Technique Rank:D Range:Short Range Style:Fūinjutsu Description:Like summoning technique but the summoning summons the summoner instead!
Generic Sealing Technique Rank:E Range:NONE Style:Fūinjutsu Description:This is a jutsu known by all shinobi.You can seal anything from weapons to puppets and to get them back you summon, which is is just unsealing them!
Reverse Four Symbols Sealing Technique Rank:A Range:Short-Mid Range Style:Fūinjutsu Description:This technique is a sealing jutsu that Neo placed over his body, setting it to activate upon his death. The jutsu releases four symbols from Neo's body that then forms a large, black sphere around him. Anything caught inside the sphere's area is then drawn in and sealed within Neo's corpse. | |
| | | Neo Yurizaki Global Moderator
Posts : 210 Type : Rouge Rank : Unknown Elements : Fire, Lightning,Wind
| Subject: Re: Neo Yurizaki Sat Jan 15, 2011 7:19 pm | |
| Yurizaki Clan information: Yurizaki Stages:Name:1st stage release jutsu Clan: Yurizaki Rank: Genin Description: The users mental, psychological, and physical strength become enhanced. The user is more aware(15%), smarter(15%) and stronger (15% stronger). The user can uses 1st stage psychological genjutsus as well dealing mental harm to the opponent. Name:2nd stage release jutsu Clan: Yurizaki Rank: Chuunin Description: The users mental strength and awareness reaches its peak and has similar effects to the sharingan. The user can copy taijutsu techniques and one elemental jutsu from the opponent (Ex. If you have blaze, you can copy any type of fire jutsu and so one for the other elements) The user can now use second stage psycological genjutsus in ther aresenal howeer there physical strength does not alter.They can now use C-ranked jutsu's corresponding to there eye element. Name: Final Stage Release Jutsu Clan: Yurizaki Rank: Chuunin, Jounin, Specail Jounin and up Description: The users final stage can allow them to use and ranked jutsu corresponding with there eye element. The user seems to see the world in a different way as there able to use 3rd stage psychological genjutsus and there awareness is that of an anbu hound. There strength is now 60% increase from there normal state. The Yurizaki is an taijutsu clan so they developed a corrisponding Taijutsu tech for the Final stage. Name: Yurizaki's Element release(Yurizaki mode) Clan: Yurizaki Type: Supplementary, Must have Final Stage Rank: Jounin + Description: The user convert all there chakra to have and element aurora around them. Increaseing there power and spead tremendously. Not jutsu's can be done in Yurizaki Mode. The user how ever can use up there aura as a power souce. (Example Blaze shintekigan Yurizaki mode = A red ominous aura appears around him as he runs at a quick spead his aura leaveing a flame trail behind him. He then punches as his hand ignites with his blaze element dealing a powerful bone crunching fire attack. Diamond = Diamond Skin to be forms and turning arm into diamond lance or what ever be creative. Your aura = your element to be summon at anytime only with taijutsu Yurizaki Jutsu:Crucifiction Interrogation Rank:S,Yurizaki Range:Short Style:Genjutsu Description:The user must make physical contact with the being to do this unless your of kage level then you must get with in three feet of the individual to attach the chakra stings that you create with pure chakra from your hand. The chakra stings go striaght into the brain and directly controls all the sences of the opponent. The chakra strings do not casue any pain or physical damage to the indiviual so this might happen to opponent without them knowing, until the opponent appears to be on a cross with spikes throught there extremities attachted to the cross and everything else is a blood red. The user can appear to question,personally torture, or both during this incounter.This is usally used for interrogation or torture by the Yurizaki.But once the opponent is touched the enemy is in the genjutsu and the user have 3 secounds to sit down and concentrate to do the full jutsu. Butterfly Evolution Range:A,Yurizaki Range:All Range Style:Genjutsu Description:The user makes a bird hand seal as the user activates his yurizaki eyes and looks at the enemy, then the enemy see the user start coming apart and becoming butterflys that replicate until the user can't see that much. The user begins to sink and as the enemy feel themselves falling the user appears and slams a explosive tag on the enemy's face. As the user jumps back the genjutsu is despelled and the enemy find there feet stuck in the ground and all the butterflies are explosive tags aswell as the original on the opponent's face. All the user has to do is make a tiger seal to activate all the explosive tags. Dusk Light Genjutsu Rank:B,Yurizaki Range:Any Range Style:Genjutsu Description: This genjutsu can be applied to another person without any special preparing.Once the enemy is in this genjutsu everything is so very real from sight, touch and hearing except the sky is a slight purple. Depending on the user it is extremely hard to get out of this genjutsu even people of the same rank. The user makes the entire area from scrap in there mind for the enemy to see. Negative Confusion Rank:C,Yurizaki Range:Any Range Style:Genjutsu Description:The user looks at the opponent with his eyes and for a couple secounds the opponent see a multipule sets of your eyes and then everything is in like negative vision Seal Carvation Rank: B, Yurizaki Range: Close range Style: Fūinjutsu Description: The user uses blood to draw out a seal on a substance that the seal will be effecting. The user will then infuse his own chakra and then uses his eyes to stun the blood into an unremovable ink like substance, that seeks into the substance and stains the molecules itself. (After using this techniques the user must make another jutsu and add it on to the ninja registration) | |
| | | Kazuki Hatoba
Posts : 1232 Type : none Rank : Genin Elements : Lightning
| Subject: Re: Neo Yurizaki Tue Jan 18, 2011 6:41 pm | |
| first of all this is epic g-mod when someone dies their chakra stops flowing through their body which will not allow the seal to come into play.
Reverse Four Symbols Sealing Technique Rank:A Range:Short-Mid Range Style:Fūinjutsu Description:This technique is a sealing jutsu that Neo placed over his body, setting it to activate upon his death. The jutsu releases four symbols from Neo's body that then forms a large, black sphere around him. Anything caught inside the sphere's area is then drawn in and sealed within Neo's corpse.
this needs to have some kind of draw back you can't send electricity into your nervous system without some kind of physilogical drawback. There should also be some sort of limit to how long you can use it because your muscles would tear up.
Lightning Release Armor Rank:S Range:Short Style:Lightning,ninjutsu,Defensive Description:Wrapping his body in a layer of Lightning chakra, the Neo can electrically stimulate his nervous system and speed up his neural synapses to react faster to danger and push his physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. While using this technique, his reflexes are comparable to that of Konoha's Yellow Flash, making it difficult, if not impossible, even for the Sharingan to keep up with him.
This one "the user some how" That isn't going to cut it either explain it or it gets canned. Wind Release: Great Dragon Air Strike Rank:A Elements:Wind Range:0m-50 meters Effects:The user some how send a stream of air with some of our chakra into the sky and then later a tornado comes down on where ever you which.You can then control it much like a summoning.This jutsu only last for two rounds.
Also several of your wind jutsu you need to change that they are sharper then any weapon or tool. I understand they can be sharp but most of those jutsu are c ranked and they cannot be sharper then some rare blades. | |
| | | Tsumi Council of Four
Posts : 1573 Type : Advanced Rank : Chuunin Elements : Ice and Water
| Subject: Re: Neo Yurizaki Sat Jan 22, 2011 3:29 pm | |
| the wind and the last one need to be fixed as Kazuki said.
However the first to he mentioned i know are canon jutsu just edited to contain Neo's name so there fine. | |
| | | Neo Yurizaki Global Moderator
Posts : 210 Type : Rouge Rank : Unknown Elements : Fire, Lightning,Wind
| Subject: Re: Neo Yurizaki Mon Jan 31, 2011 10:01 pm | |
| I know I didn't have to but I just took out the two wind jutsu in question, but as Misery said the Lightning Release Armor and Reverse Four Symbols Sealing Technique are canon jutsu that I got straight from Naruto. The Lightning Armor is a technique that the fourth Raikage uses and the Reverse Four Symbols Sealing Technique is the a technique that Danzo used, well actually it's a seal and if u check my appearance it includes that fact that there are four tattoos on the four corners of my abdomen which would be the seal, it's also a technique to seal my doujutsu if I happen to die because it kills destroys my eyes to the molecular level. As what happened wen Danzo destroyed Shisui's Sharingan eye to prevent Madara from using it, just by using this technique. | |
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| Subject: Re: Neo Yurizaki Tue Mar 22, 2011 7:52 pm | |
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