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Posts : 71 Type : Swamp Rank : Chuunin Elements : Water; Lightning
| Subject: Shinji Hattori Mon Apr 18, 2011 3:22 pm | |
| Hattori,Shinji General InformationName: Shinji Hattori Gender: Male Age: 20 Height: 5'10 Weight: 160lbs DOB: 21st Nov Appearance: - Spoiler:
Personality: Shinji has a very brave and cynical nature, his tinge of ego sometimes shrouding his much calmer and more refined self. Showing a form of kindness and humor, Shinji has shown to be very genuine in his respect of allies, and foes alike.Humor and finding things funny, also seem to be one of his strong traits. Showing this after winning a battle, or when fighting in mock-combat, or even in real combat, not trully showing a serious side to him. His bravery showing, as in everyday missions, showing his skill in weaponry, and preforming daring deeds, and even suicidal missions, to accomplish the job, for sake of the whole. Humor and finding things funny, also seem to be one of his strong traits.Shinji administers his pride and humor in relationships, never offering a dull moment, and keeping the events lively Likes: Planning, Having fun, Combat. Dislikes: Unnecessary violence, Surrender, Lies. Character InformationRank: Chuunin Country: Numa no Kuni Combat Strengths: Speed, Strategy, Perceptiveness, Unusual willpower to resist genjutsu. Combat Weaknesses: Stamina, Disadvantage when not concealed, Ego. Equipment:[*]20 Kunai [*]20 Shuriken [*]30 Senbon [*]30Explosive Tags [*]30ft Ninja Wire. Weapon: 1x Super Vibrating Sword Element(s): Water and Lightning. Jutsu:- Spoiler:
Name: Body Replacement Technique Rank: E-rank Element: N/A Type: Supplementary Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach using the Body Flicker Technique, the moment an attack hits. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. The user can then use this confusion to escape or launch a counter-attack. Exploding tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. -- Name: Transformation Technique Rank: E-rank Element: N/A Type: Supplementary Description: This jutsu allows the user to transform either themselves or another object into the appearance of another person, animal, or object.The transformation technique is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. -- Name: Clone Technique Rank: E-rank Element: N/A Type: Supplementary Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones do not have shadows and will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.). -- Name: Body Flicker Technique Rank: D-rank Element: N/A Type: Supplementary Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed.[2] To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination. -- Name: Genjutsu Kai Rank: D-rank Element: N/A Type: Defensive Description: The ninja stops the flow of chakra in their body, and then applies an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra. -- Name: Water Clone Technique Rank: C-rank Element: Water Type: Supplementary Description: The Water Clone Technique is similar to the Shadow Clone Technique except it creates clones out of water that have one-tenth of the original person's power.Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body without losing control. Like other clone techniques, if the water clones are injured enough they will revert back to normal water. -- Name: Hidden Mist Technique Rank: D-rank Element: Water Type: Supplementary Description: This displacement technique is a specialty of the ninja from Kirigakure, where one causes a mist to spring forth by lifting up some water, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu. -- Name: Water Release: Syrup Capture Field Rank: C-rank Element: Water Type: Supplementary Description: The user spits out high-viscosity, chakra-mixed water, aimed at a surface of wide scope. This is a stream of sticky liquid which can be used to form an adhesive trap that can inhibit a person's mobility. One can effectively reduce their enemy's area of activity with this technique, and has the effect of being able to take complete control over the battlefield. The normal scope of this technique is normally just a few meters, but if prepared, it is also possible to make an entire pond of starch syrup. Being caught in the technique can be avoided by channeling chakra to one's feet allowing one to walk upon it uninhibited, beforehand. -- Name: Water Release: Water Whip Rank: (C-rank) Element: Water Type: Offensive, Supplementary ; Short to Mid range Description: The user creates a whip made of water that can wrap around the opponent. The user can also funnel lightning chakra to shock anyone wrapped in it. This jutsu seems to be known by the Kirigakure Hunter-nin. -- Name: Scattering One Thousand Crows Technique Rank: C-rank Element: N/A Type: Offensive, Supplementary ; All ranges Description: This technique summons a flock of countless crows, dazzling the enemy. The user can freely manipulate the crows by emitting chakra from his fingertips and altering it into high frequency waves. Since the crows continuously clone themselves, the target becomes completely surrounded, obscuring their field of vision. When no longer needed, the crows will simply disappear in a puff of smoke. -- Name: Secret Technique Stone Needles Rank: (C-rank) Element: N/A Type: Supplementary ; Short-range Description: This technique makes use of the users chakra as a paralysing agent. The user throws kunai with strings attached at the opponent. Once the enemy is hit, chakra is run through the string to paralyse the opponent, which will serve to either incapacitate the enemy or allow the user to attack.However, against those who can absorb chakra, this technique could backfire as the target may simply steal chakra from the user, while exhibiting immunity to the paralysis, as Kisame demonstrated. -- Name: Lightning Release: Thunder Binding Rank: (B-rank) Element: Lightning Type: Defensive, Supplementary ; Short-range Description: This technique lets the user create a three-sided wall of electricity to bind their opponent. The user must have three conductors to stick in the ground to create the points. Furthermore, once the enemy is inside, if they come into contact with the wall they will be electrocuted. The only way the jutsu can be broken is if an outside party were to strike one of the walls with a strong enough attack, which will then deactivate the other walls. -- Name: Lightning Release: Four Pillar Bind Rank: (B-rank) Element: Lightning Type: Offensive, Supplementary ; Short to Mid range Description: Four giant rock pillars are summoned around the enemy, then shoot bolts of lightning, immobilizing the target and possibly doing damage to them. -- Name: Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration Rank: (C-rank) Element: Lightning Type: Offensive ; Mid-range Description: The user generates a large amount of lightning in their hands, which can then be released into conductive materials to electrocute their foes. -- Name: Silent Killing Rank: (A-rank) but Shinji's ability in using it is B-ranked Element: N/A Type: Method of Murder Description: As the name suggests, this technique is simply a very quiet method of killing an opponent, usually from behind with a blade. Additionally, because the user is very silent, it cannot be defended against. The user will often slit their opponent's throat, preventing any cry that might give them away. The Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist are said to be masters of this technique, and were even good enough to track and kill opponents through sound alone.
Other InformationRelationships: N/A Family: N/A BACKGROUNDBio: Humble beginnings- Spoiler:
Shinji Hattori was born in the Swamp Country as the one and only child to two parent ninjas of the Swamp Village. His father hails from a very old clan of ninjas which name is Hattori. It is said that they were one of the first clans of ninjas to appear. Through the years though the Hattori clan preserved their name but it was divided greatly and Hattori clan members rarely know anyone else beyond themselves that are Hattori. Just like most of the Hattori the ninjas excelled in using traditional ninja combat that lacked jutsus or any sort of the new unorthodox ways of fighting. So did Shinji who was came to be born very talented in the art of assassination and concealment. Ever since he joined the Academy of Swamp at the age of six his speed is something that every teacher notes about him. He graduated at the age of 12 and was assigned to a genin team. Days of teamwork- Spoiler:
Shinji's personality and humoristic views of situations brought life in the gloomy genin team he was assigned to. His attitude changed the other's views on life and they became friendly rather than hostile. This friendliness brought harmony to the team and they found out that they have great team chemistry and missions for them were quite easy as their teamwork was impressive compared to the other genin teams. Shinji's sensei was a very hybrid shinobi excelling in more than one aspect of the art of the ninja and despite the big differences between the genins he was able to teach them what he knew and he successfully unlocked the potential hidden within anyone of them. The sensei was quite strict and stern when it came to the chuunin exams and even though he knew about their amazing teamwork he signed them for the exams when they had turned sixteen. The team both in individual and team tasks were successful and took the highlights on them with many offers from rich people for different missions and as bodyguards.
Separation,Trauma, Ressurection.- Spoiler:
Of course Shinji's genin team was jubilant after their promotion to the so much desired rank of chuunin but they realized that they would rarely see each other and separation was something none of them wanted but it was necessary. They knew they had to face it and overcome it this time individually. Musashi, his male teammate, was assigned as a bodyguard to a rich daimyo while Nami, his female teammate, was assigned to the Spy corps. Shinji on the other hand was picked in the Hunter Nin corps due to his great dedication to the village. From that day on Shinji did not see none of his teammates for a very long time. Every day he practiced with his fellow hunter ninjas and each time he was sent on a mission he returned gloomy with a cold facial expression. The chuunin's personality was grinded inside and locked in the depths of his heart as Shinji turned into a cold and ruthless tool of Swamp. Shinji achieved many merits in service to the hunter nin corps but a faithful day he realized how his soul was absorbed by the HUnter nin corps and had shaped him into a machine of killing. The faithful day was the funeral of his great friend and former teammate Musashi. There he also was reunited with Nami which was shedding tears, she never had the courage to admit her feelings to Musashi but now it was too late. The death of his friend awoke the long forgotten personality of Shinji. He realized how precious is one's life and with lots of persistance Shinji was able to drop out from the Hunter nin's corps. The chuunin's mark of the life he lead as a ruthless and cold killer was marked on his right shoulder with the tatoo of the corps but the Hattori conceals it with a metal shoulderpad.
Currently...- Spoiler:
Although his former personality was unlocked, Shinji still was very adept in the art of assassination and did not hesitate when it came to killing but he was aware of what he was doing and for what reason. He was once again a normal ninja and not a murderer.
-------- RP Sample: Dispatch Pinhead. Mission ID: 4035 Requested by: Classified Brief: A syndicate of criminals has arisen in the border lands of swamp lead by an influential man known as Pinhead. The syndicate operates in kidnapping for ransom, assassinations, theft and smuggling. The syndicate is yet rising and by no means should it grow roots further in our lands. Location: Within the Itsumo River Forest. Objective: Eliminate Pinhead *picture inserted*"So this must be him eh ?" Shinji rose an eyebrow monitoring a short figure walking and insanely gesturing around. He seemed to have two constant bodyguards next to him. If the ninja was able to intercept them before they entered this 'mansion' it would have been easy dispatching them but this... The mansion looked more like a reinforced fort and it was constantly secured by patrols and stationary guards that had pretty much useful items as projectors and sirens. Breaching inside the fort would be hard but locating him inside was a different story, the chuunin was not sure how many guards were inside the building too. Something caught Shinji's eye and he quickly generated the plan of breaching in. Using the mist technique would've been much much easier for the ninja but he did not risk letting any possible ninjas around for his presence that would act quickly to prevent harm to their boss - Pinhead. Using the night as disguise he synchronized himself on when the projector light was moved from a window which below it were wooden ledges that were most likely planned for building a terrace but the idea seemed to be abandoned. This although did not interest Shinji. The ninja grabbed his kunai which was connected with a wire and hurled it forward to the wall that the window was on. He swinged right at the time when neither the projector nor the patrols were there and he landed on one of the ledges further from the window just in case anyone inside did not see him. The chuunin approached the window carefully and opened it very slowly with all his senses activated at the maximum. No one was around and the Hattori did not wait for another chance to enter. The mansion inside was very luxurious and had walls of marble and also the floor was made of marble although it was covered with red carpets. Shinji closed the window carefully and listened to everything around him and also analyzed the place seeking any hiding places or traps. There was nothing...until a feint sound of steps was heard coming from the corner. The ninja leaned on the corner of the corridor patiently waiting for the steps to pass away. But they did not. They were coming towards the chuunin. It was just one who was coming towards the ninja and he prepared behind his corner as the steps became louder and louder. With a swift side step and a kunai in his hand he swinged the kunai at the man's throat and the victim dropped dead. Now it was time to move fast and locate his target. Luck was on Shinji's side though as an annoying loud voice echoed through the corridors issuing commands. It was Pinhead. With great pace and following the voice he climbed stairs without encoutering anyone. Finally when he reached the floor where the voice was most loud he slayed another two guards which were stationary and continued his walk towards the entrance of the room where the voice was coming from. He looked around and noticed there was no one and Shinji peaked inside seeing the two bodyguards that he saw before he infiltrated who seemed to be violently abused by the angry short Pinhead. There was no way he could enter unnoticed in this small room so the chuunin used the moment of surprise that was in his hand to fire three shurikens at the targets. All connected except the one aimed at Pinhead. "Heh you brat you think you can kill me off that easy? " He snickered and did the tiger seal but Shinji was able to avoid the sudden blast behind him which tore apart the wall and it crumbled leaving the two inside trapped. " No you are in my territory, you little brat." Pinhead did a few handseals and sliced the air with his hand sending air slicers towards Shinji who was fast enough to avoid a fatal contact with them but he indeed was injured. The air slicers continued and the Hattori ninja had no other choice but to keep evading. He had no other options as he was in great disadvantage in such small space against a wind user. But the chuunin's stamina weakness was now calling and he knew he could not keep dodging forever and a smart idea popped in his head. While in the midst of dodging he tossed away kunais at certain positions around Pinhead who seemed to be blinded by anger after he felt he was being underestimated due to his short height. Feeling the toll of exhaustion on his body Shinji made a few handseals and a water clone popped out of nowhere going the other direction and forming handseals too. The great focus on Shinji by Pinhead was his mistake as the clone had finished the jutsu that the Hattori had planned. "Lightning Release: Thunder Binding." A wall of lightning surrounded Pinhead who was shocked in surprise from the sudden turn of events. Shinji had tossed three kunais on the floor in a triangle around Pinhead and three right above them, using them as conductors his jutsu was successful. The chuunin had no other option to react quickly and finally end this battle. Shinji charged with his blade surging with lightning and vibration and the clone timing with Shinji's pace deactivated the jutsu while Pinhead was decapitated by the blade of the Swamp ninja. The clone dissipated into water and Shinji sheath his blade. "Time to look for the weapon storage and burn this place to nothing." ----- Ok i usually don't do such long posts unless it's a solo topic cause i tend to give more freedom on other players on describing the surroundings, actions and such. So usually I do two or three paragraphs although if I am motivated I can do much more than two or three paragraphs. If there is anything with the RP sample and the ninja sheet, I apologize and I would make sure I tend to it as quickly as possible.
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| | | Deuce
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| Subject: Re: Shinji Hattori Tue Apr 19, 2011 8:58 am | |
| Ready for mod checking I believe. | |
| | | Madam Red - Bookwoman Profile Killer
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| Subject: Re: Shinji Hattori Tue Apr 19, 2011 11:11 am | |
| Alright~ First, let me present myself and welcome you to DoS~ My name would be Bookwoman, but you'll also hear me being called Asa, Ryohei, Gokudera, Madam Red and some other nicknames which I forgot right now. And...I am also the profile killer of this site. Well, more or less xD I just mod them and am very picky, which is why I bother people with usually huge posts with demands for details, explanations, changes and so on~ So, here I go I guess~ First, your personality. Make it somewhat longer. Don't hesitate to add details and such. Go deeper into his character traits. - Quote :
- Combat Strengths: Speed, Strategy, Perceptiveness, Unusual willpower to resist genjutsu.
What do you exactly mean by willpower to resist genjutsu? Is he less easily taken over by one, is he able to detect one easily, and what levels of genjutsu can he resist against? - Quote :
- Weapon: Super Vibrating Sword
In the description of the sword, they are talking about it being a stronger version of a wind jutsu. Shouldn't you be having wind affinity too to make this technique work? - Quote :
- The Infinite Embrace
I do know it is a canon jutsu, though, because of some troubles with people considering it as an OPed juts, I'd like you or to remove it from your list or to add a restriction to it, like, how long it can work and how much it drains. That sort of limitations. About your jutsu in general: I'd like you to follow the proper template. Not only it makes it easier for everyone to read it directly, but also it looks cleaner on your profile that way. Do not forget the range of the jutsu (people tend to forget about it). Your rp sample looks good to me~ Paragraphs, a pretty good battle scene and spelling/grammar looks good. Fix/Replace everything I said above and then you'll be approved by me~ - Bookwoman | |
| | | Deuce
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| Subject: Re: Shinji Hattori Tue Apr 19, 2011 12:04 pm | |
| @Bookwoman.
Thanks for the welcome. I wouldn't have accepted any less detailed post from you ^^
- Personality was improved. - I didn't make myself clear enough, I apologize. It isn't resistance as in immunity but his awareness is good enough to detect certain jutsu while the 'resist' part is that he is more resistant to the effects of a genjutsu a.k.a mind trauma and etc... The levels of genjutsu he can resist are chuunin-like and few weak jounin-like genjutsus. - No. The weapon itself is a normal blade although it seems to be made of a more conductive sort of metal which has the awkward effects of vibrating strongly when channeled with lightning. IT has nothing to do with wind since Killer Bee doesn't the element of Wind. - Infinite Embrace was removed. It was weird to me either.
About the template I used the one I found in the forums.
EDIT: I forgot to note that the ranks of jutsus which are in parenthesis are judged by me since they have no rank in narupedia. Since you are the mod though you can overrule my judgement and see if it will fit better. Added Genjutsu release
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| | | Yakate Council of Four
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| Subject: Re: Shinji Hattori Tue Apr 19, 2011 12:50 pm | |
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| | | Madam Red - Bookwoman Profile Killer
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| Subject: Re: Shinji Hattori Tue Apr 19, 2011 12:50 pm | |
| Thank you for the explanations~
And you are quite welcome. xD Also, my posts tend to be longer than that. But, yeah, your profile was close to perfect~ So, you were spared from my Booky Anger.
Congratulations. You have been approved by Bookwoman~
Now get someone else to approve of it and you'll be free to go rp-ing.
Enjoy and I hope we'll meet somewhere in a topic.
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| Subject: Re: Shinji Hattori Tue Apr 19, 2011 2:13 pm | |
| approved by council of four member Mari ENJOY YOUR TIME IN THE SWAMP Moved and noted | |
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