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PostSubject: Miki Naito   Miki Naito Icon_minitime1Sun Apr 24, 2011 10:45 pm

Name of Clan: Miki Naito (Water Knights)

Name of Bloodline: Senka Mizu (War Water)

Clan History:
Spoiler:

Bloodline Type:
People born of this clan will gain this bloodline as an innate ability. However in order to unlock the later stages one must train in their current stage or have a dire circumstance happen to them in order to unlock the next level, such as tremendous pain, physically or emotionally.

Requirements
-All members of this clan must have Water of their Main element and any other sub or subs
-Members can be from anywhere (no set village)

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Bloodline Information: The bloodline comes in 3 stages.
....Overview....
Even though the person won’t know they have the ability until they use it for the first time, they can create an objects, simple ones in this stage, seemingly out of thin air, made of water. See the chakra of members of this clan are special and always have an affiliation with water as the primary element.
Because of this, their water chakra is special, and acts as a magnet for water particles surrounding them. Thus, in a combination of pulling water to them and using their own water chakra they can create physical manifestations of objets made of water in their hands and on their bodies. However once the creations loose contact from the clan member they dissolve and splash to the ground unless connected to the user in some fashion. Also any great heat can cause the creations to begin to evaporate.

Stage One::
----Starts at Academy Student
This is the basic and starting stage. The members of this clan can utilize their special water charka to form solid objects, by condensing water, it may look liquid but is very solid. It is subsetable to hot temperatures but the chakra holding it's form helps in regular temperatures and against up to C level fire jutsu.. In this stage it is simple, able to create up to two objects (more objects tax the users chakra more), that are stronger as the level of the ninja goes up, these objects are as if they’re the real deal, as in a base ball bat is just as string as a real bat only when it breaks it splashes apart. The objects can be broken down and returned to chakra but if they are broken they the chakra that was used on them is lost. In addition to these two objects the user can also make smaller objects, Usually armor, on their person. Thing such as gauntlets and a helmet. A a maximum of 3 smaller objects. If any of these objects leave physical contact with the user then the chakra being used to hold it’s shape is severed and the object will become water and the user losses the chakra he or she used to make the object.

.:To achieve Stage Two, minimum of 2 training post of no less then 1000 words total is necessary.

Stage Two::
---Genin Rank Minimum
In this stage the user has gained the ability to create up to 5 objects( note multiple objects will tax ones chakra more.) and are not limited to objects they can hold. Solid walls can be created and objects of the sort. Also the user can lose contact with the objects for up to 10 yards before the chakra keeping the objects shape dissipates. However upon losing contact, and thus severing the constant chakra, the objects will grow weaker until they dissolve entirely. They will last for 5 posts until they dissipate or until the user comes into connect with them to renew their chakra structure. In addition to the 5 objects the user can create a nearly completely body of armor for themselves that can repair it’s self if damaged slowly as long as it is still touching the user.
A Second ability is gained in this stage. A healing quality is unlocked here. Channeling their water chakra into their hand and thinking of healing, the user’s hand or hands will glow a shade of blue, emitting a soft glow. Then must be placed just over the area that is affected or damaged. Hovering their hands over the afflicted area it can be healed. This is taxing on the one healing and if his concentration is broken or disturbed it can leave ugly scars on the one being healed.
list of things that can be healed in Stage Two::
.Burns are the easiest to heal
.Small cuts and scrapes
.Bruises
.Muscle Pain
.Cure low level poisons
-cannot mend bones. Is mainly focused on healing muscle and tissue damage.

.::To achieve stage 3 a minimum of 4 training posts of 2000 words total::.

Stage Three::
----Must be Highly skilled Chunin (Judged by someone who has already unlocked stage 3) or more preferably a Jonin or higher.
The ability to create objects increases to a maximum of creating up to 10 objects at a time(note creating more objects will tax ones chakra more.) while also able to create themselves a full set of armor, unlimited number of smaller objects as long as these smaller objects do not leave the user. The other objects can go 20 yards away from the user until they dissipate and still weaken as they are separated from the creator. Here they will last for 10 posts until they dissipate unless they come into contact with the creator which renews them for 10 more posts. This can be repeated. They can also create objects such as walls and lose contact with them like Stage Two.
As for the Healing Ability, it is increased, causing the healing to be preformed faster and higher levels of what is listed in stage two are able to be healed.
It is in this level that the real Justu and secrets of the clan are gifted and accessible. (The jutsu that are available to members are listed below under clan jutsu) These jutsu are NOT accessible to anyone who has not reached Stage Three. These are limited however, only TWO of these Jutsu can be chosen. How are they chosen? Upon reaching stage three the person enters a “trance like state” where they meet their inner water chakra within themselves. Their chakra takes the form of an animal or creature and talks to them. They explain the chakra they possess and tell them of their options. Explaining the gifts their chakra is ready to grant them. This may seem strange but the jutsu are imbedded in the charka and in this way the chakra and the person become completely one. They present the choice and the user accepts two of the jutsu and the others are lost as those two are unlocked to the user. They will then know how to preform those jutsu upon awakening from their trance.



Ultimate Bloodline Jutsu:
::..These are the Jutsu Presented to those who achieve the Third Stage..::

(Only two of these can be chosen and once they are the others will not be attainable to them!)
-----Your decision is FINAL-----
I.
Name: Rikkiddo Yoroi
Type: Bloodline
Rank: S
Range: 40 yrds
Description: This is an advance technique for offense as well as defense. The user Channels a great deal of chakra in his body, as his body begin to act as a magnet for water in the area. This can be a little bit of water from the atmosphere, nearby body of water, or even from the plant life around the user. Many times when this is used, the area will look like it was deprived of water cause it was all taken for this jutsu.The user can begin to form the jutsu with no hand signs once he has initiated the gathering internally. The water and his chakra will form a human body around him, the size of a huge man, and then knights armor will materialize around him. This hulking knight is formed around the user and controlled by his thoughts and gets to the heights of most bijuu. This is a very powerful jutsu but also very draining and uses a ton of chakra. A weapon will normally materialize out of the water as well and a big shield. The user will also develop a sword and shield but no armor. A shield is not necessary, sometimes it’s two weapons or one weapon, its the users preference. Regardless the user controls the huge knight floating off and around him and can attack on the ground at his level. Since the knight is made up around the user, anyone who engages the user directly will suffer in the water that surrounds the user, with lack of air and slowed motion, moving as if they are under water cause...they are and they cannot breath under the water unless they have a jutsu that allows it. The user is in a small bubble within the construct and air bubbles are fed into the bubble, and because of the air he can move at regular speed.
He also make the big knight mimic his own movements. This jutsu is very strong and piercing it is very very difficult because the mass of water guarding the user. The armor is and weapons are hardened and juts as strong if not stronger then regular weapons.
This jutsu can last for 15 posts until the night must dissipate in a rushing wave of water falling down around the user, pushing anything around him back a few feet. It can last 18 posts if the user has an abnormal amount of chakra or a special circumstance that grants them more chakra but nothing past it. After the jutsu is done the user will have a fever from the physical exhaustion. They will me almost completely drained of their chakra and only D rank moves will be possible. Much rest is needed after this technique and if they fight anytime before a week has pasted after using this technique they will only be able to use C rank moves and nothing more. After a week they will be fine but still sore form the bodies exhaustion.
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II.
Name: Aquarius Sense
Type: Bloodline
Rank: S
Range: Anywhere form half a mile to 5 miles
Description: The user must complete a set of hand signs and then hold the final sign with their hands together, closing their eyes and focusing their power. This unlocks the aqua sense and their eyes will turn blue and black as seen below. All color will leave their vision and they will in a sense, see in black and white, but the white will be blue. In this state a user can see the blue aura of a persons chakra in around their bodies, and see it intensify as they mold it for jutsu. They can more clearly see if the person has a water affinity. If they do they will leave trace amounts of their chakra behind them, as if a ghost trail, that the user of this jutsu can follow. The closer they are to the person the stronger the trail is and the higher level or more powerful the chakra the stronger the trail is. This is visible(When tracking these types) for up half a mile for genin, a mile behind a chunin, mile and a half for a jonin and 2 miles for any S rank or above. Any special kind of high level chakra can be visible further if it has a water affinity. As in a Bijuu or Jincurkiki, they can be tracked for up to 5 miles cause of their high level and unique chakra.
Another unique trait of this jutsu is it makes the user hyper aware of water around them and water style jutsu near them. If they see a water style jutsu, they can later learn it, but not instantly. It will be something they can learn in have the time in training post as long as they SEE the technique and it is a WATER style only.
This jutsu drains chakra slowly and not a lot of it. However keeping it up for too long can have various effects on the eyes, from drying them out, to causing a blinding light and near blindness for short periods after use if it is used for too long. To long being a full three travel posts would cause pain in the eyes and blindness for a full day until the eyes could recover. Another example would be over 10 posts in any other kind of topic. If not use for 10 posts the pain can be little but has to be some in the eyes. (Use judgement, if 10 makes you blind for a day you shouldn’t be fine after using it for 9 posts and stopping)
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III.
Name: Hand of the Holy Waters
Type: Bloodline
Rank: S
Range: 12 inches
Description: The user must channel their chakra into their hands and usually closes their eyes to focus. This jutsu requires a good deal of concentration and if broken will erupt in a blinding white concussive blast of chakra causing severe pain and burns to the one attempting to heal and those within 10 yards of them.
However if preformed correctly, un-distracted, once chakra is gathered then the user’s hands will be covered in what looks like blue flame, this is purely the chakra manifesting, and then the user claps his hands together, holding them for a second. Then fires through hand signs, holding the last on with finger tips touching and thumbs touching making a triangle with their hands. The blue fire then turns a deep blue and is pulled into the triangle the user is holding, and swirls there like a dark blue whirlpool. The users eyes will then open, and be a bright shining white at the same time that they slam their hands together, crushing the dark blue whirlpool in them. As a result they’re hands will turn a deep blue and this color will spread up their forearms to their elbows. they then look at the person they wish to heal and separate their hands. In each palm there is a deep blue slow spinning disk of chakra. They are then placed on the person directly, but the healing really begins when the hands get within 12 inches. Once they make contact with the person the dark blue color will spread into the person, changing their skin to the color as it is slowly passed from the user to the sick or injured person. (This can be used on ones self.) This is a very powerful healing ability and if preformed correctly can heal a variety of things. The user afterward if left with no strength in his arms , unable to lift arms for 5 minutes (2 posts) and very tired. Both the user and who was saved will be covered in a cold sweat and the user will have burned a significant amount of chakra. The users hands will have suffered 2nd degree burns from the chakra that cannot be repaired by any jutsu. Using more then once without allowing healing time will definitely leave the hands covered in 3rd degree burns, numb and unable to move for a few weeks, and has the potential to burn nerves in the hands to lose them permanently. Using it 3 times and you might as well cut off your hands for all the good they’ll do you afterwards.
:::Heals:::
-Any stab wound and poison/venom.
-Completely cleanses the system of infections
-Can save someone from a fatal blow
-Mends broken bones
-Basically anything except cannot make the dead come back to life
-Also a lack of a soul. If the soul is gone this will not animate a body or call a soul back
-and if the heart or head is missing or detached... the person has to be alive but can be on the brink of death, his will fully revitalize them and their body.
-Cannot cure deceases or illnesses that someone was born with.

IV.
Name: Rolling Tides of Poseidon
Type: Bloodline
Rank: S
Range: 2 Miles
Description: This is a massive attack with the power to alter a landscape. After preforming it however the user will be left drained and unable to preform anything over a C rank jutsu after it. It leaves the muscles of the user very drained and exhausted.
This jutsu is called up using a set of 88 hand signs, gathering chakra from around them and within them. It takes a moment to gather the needed amount, the same amount of time to complete the hand signs, 2 posts. If they stop doing the hand signs they have to start all over if they want to do the justu. Upon completion, the user will thrust one palm to the sky, and all the chakra they have gathered from themselves and around them will appear in a blue swirling ball, the size of a beach ball. They can dissipate the ball into nothingness, if they choose not to complete the jutsu.
To release it they point the ball in the direction they wish it to be unleashed. The word KAI from the user will cause the ball to erupt in a vortex of blue death as the force of an ocean is unleashed in the specified direction. Enough water to create a tsunami wave 20 feet high and move at the speed of 110 mph. this can level and flood forests, fill craters to make lakes, and even cause all the lava of an erupting volcano to cool and harden. This tsunami begins to loose power after the first few feet and is harmless after about 2 miles of destruction. It is said nothing can stand against it, so don’t get in it’s way. Cannot be used more then once a fight and this jutsu leaves the arm that cast it immobile, like Orochimaru’s arms were, for 6 posts if still in a fight, or a week in a sling.


V.
Name: Spirit Serpent Resurrection
Type: Bloodline
Rank: S
Range: 25 ft tall, reaching out 80 yrds
Description: This is a powerful jutsu that allows the user to create physical manifestation of a great Hydra Made of Water. To create this the user had to submerge themselves in water and complete hand seals underwater. This molds their chakra as well as the water around them, pulling them into a shape of his monstrous creature. Soon the water encase’s the shinobi and he rises from the water at the center of a swirling mass of water, in an air pocket, while moving water forms a huge creature the size of a bijuu with 3 heads. It cannot travel very far from water and cannot be made without a large body of water present, like a lake or ocean or river. (smaller versions can be created from small bodies of water.
This creature is very resilient and because it is made up of moving water, very powerful. It’s heads can reach out to strike, growing longer, using the water around to grow, and strike up to 80 yrds form it’s position. The moving water and thickness of the creature makes it very difficult to strike the user, who inside his air bubble, is holding a hand sign to maintain this creature. They can do anything but if the hand sign is broken then the mass of water will fall down around them.
The most impressive feature about this creation is that if a head is severed or severely damaged, two more will grow in it’s place. No more then 12 heads can be created. They can all attack different places as long as the user can picture them being attacked. This jutsu lasts for a maximum of 20 posts, after which regardless of what is happening, unless someone manages to get the user more chakra, they burn out of chakra and the entire Hydra explodes in a massive shower of water. If only maintaining under 6 heads for 12 posts the user will only expend half of their chakra. Breaking this and the user is under half or almost out.
After preforming this technique the user will have strain on his lungs form being in the sir bubble and a burning sensation through the body. They don’t need rest right away but will soon other wise the body risks serious strain and much depletion of chakra. If a target moves out of range and leaves the water, or far enough away form the water, the user can move the Manifestation away form the water but once it leave the water it will only last for 4 more posts(if 4 are left) before it runs out of water to maintain the construct.


VI.
Name: Sacred Typhoon Cleansing
Type: Bloodline
Rank: S
Range: 250 yrds
Description: In this jutsu the user channels raw chakra into their hands until they glow blue and what looks like blue flame manifests around his hands. Emotion can add to the power of this attack and make it stronger and easy to preform in angry or rage-full states of mind. (Must be around some water, doesn’t have to be a lot, a big pond at least but a large lake is preferable) After gathering the needed chakra they then forma hand signs and their eyes will glow a deep blue and they clap their hands together, holding the hand sign, as dark clouds gather over head. Then wind shoots from the sky and touched the water around forming water spouts, 5 at the most, while a 6th one rises from underneath the user, up to their waist, lifting them high into the air, at 30 feet, so they can see can control the 5 water spouts with their mind. These have great destructive damage and can move at speeds of 80 mph. They can go on land and the water will remain, though chakra molding up to 250 yards from the user. After that they explode in a gust of wind and water.
This jutsu lasts for 8 posts at the most and the user is totally drained of chakra after if they control any more then 3 spouts at a time, unless they have an abnormal amount of chakra. After the jutsu the user’s legs are greatly scratched from the water rising them up into the air, but after the jutsu the water doe not drop them but lower the back. It’s the rapidly spinning water that damages the legs and slows their motion. Bed rest and some time without moving them is recommended after this jutsu. If to much movement the user will suffer leg damage and broken bones for they are so weak. They will also suffer form a great head ache after this jutsu from controlling such strong chakra.


Strengths:
-Always gives the user a weapon as long as they have some chakra.
-Good for stealth, when giving up a physical weapon they have a back up.
-Water Chakra Control Experts
-Overall excellent Chakra Control
-Healing abilities
-Excellent with a variety of weapons


Weaknesses:
-Great Heat makes many of the techniques weaker
-Clan becomes cocky in battle, assuming to have the weapon advantage
-Utilizing the Bloodline can burn Chakra fast
-Clan Focuses on Weaponry combat and Ninjutsu and are overall lacking in good genjutsu
-Overusing makes them very dehydrated because in pulling water and water chakra they tend to pull moisture form themselves when using the bloodline to much.
-Healing can go bad and leave terrible scaring.
Jutsu utilizing the clans Bloodline
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PostSubject: Re: Miki Naito   Miki Naito Icon_minitime1Mon Apr 25, 2011 1:38 am

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The members of this clan can utilize their special water charka to form solid objects.

Solid? If it's out of water, it can't be solid. :G If it's solid, that means it's ice, and ice doesn't fall into the 'water chakra' category. You might mean densely compressed water. That's fine, although it -can- be penetrated given sufficient force. Also, note that a drawback of using highly compressed water is that it will easily evaporate, i.e. less heat is required for it to boil.

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Solid walls can be created and objects of the sort.

Again, it can't be entirely 'solid'. It can 'appear' to be solid. :G Any further indications to this will be ignored, but please deal with them.

The 'Stage Three' jutsu choosing method is... fancy. It's a clever clone of the unique Mangekyo jutsus. I like it. :3

Rikkiddo Yoroi is like a custom Susanoo. x3 Again, clever remake of the Uchiha clan ability.

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This tsunami begins to loose power after the first few feet

This... is a stupid limitation. o.o;

Spirit Serpent Resurrection - I assume that if your foe runs away from a large water source, you have no choice but to inactivate the technique in order to pursue him? Or can you control the entire watery body of the Hydra and chase him on land? If yes, the number of posts this can last must be limited, since you're either losing a lot of water as it spills against the land, or using a lot more chakra to maintain the water within the beast.

I have to go now, so I'll mod the rest later. o.x;
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PostSubject: Re: Miki Naito   Miki Naito Icon_minitime1Mon Apr 25, 2011 1:35 pm

I have made so corrections for you,

1. In regards to the solid object I have tried to make it more clear, and yes great heat is a weakness of the clan as you can see.

2. At higher levels the Chakra that is holding the water nature together forms like an envelope to protect and cause it to be solid. This is obviously penetrable but is made solid by packed water and chakra. If you'll allow your mind to play with the concept.

3.Thank you ^^ Im glad I could entertain you!

4. I realize it is a stupid limitation but for these jutsu being S rank I want to have limitations on them so they are not OPed. IF you don't think it's necessary I can remove it.

5. I have made the Serpent Resurrection regarding what you have pointed out, more clear at the end of it. Let me know if it suits you.
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PostSubject: Re: Miki Naito   Miki Naito Icon_minitime1Tue Apr 26, 2011 12:21 am

xD The limitation is stupid because no enemy would stand only a few feet in front of an attack like that. You could've increased the weakening range to like, a few meters~:3

Anyway, it's fine. x3 Accepted! Unless Asa wants to read over it again~o-o;
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PostSubject: Re: Miki Naito   Miki Naito Icon_minitime1Tue Apr 26, 2011 8:05 am

Yaka pwns with bloodlines, so it is accepted by me too~<3

Have fun Ryo!

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PostSubject: Re: Miki Naito   Miki Naito Icon_minitime1Tue Apr 26, 2011 2:39 pm

I'll just throw my acceptance in here to.

Mostly because I'd like to note, that i LOVE this bloodline. and hope you might not mind me one day joining ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Miki Naito   Miki Naito Icon_minitime1Tue Apr 26, 2011 5:36 pm

Thank you very much Misery!! ^^

And by all means make a character for it! That is the reason I left spots open for others who wish to be apart of this clan. All are welcome as long as there are spots open!
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