Bantan Yabakus profile for jounin(got permission to try for jounin)

General Information

Name:Bantan Yabaku
Gender: Male
Age: 318 but looks 18(I did this because of the plot, since he is from iwa before it was destroyed...I guess hes kind of like Kakuzu who can live a very long time....just the living part, not stealing hearts or anything.)
Height: 6.1
Weight: 180
DOB: oct 9th
Appearance: He has long black hair in a pony tail, always wears a white hat with a white suite in black stripes all down it. The tie is also white with black stripes a crossed it. His hat has a white ribbon around it with a flat bill all around , basically a round hat. His face has a scar of an X on it and he has hazel colored eyes with a tint of yellow. Bantan has a round face structure, his body is athletic with a six pack and a muscular toned chest. His biceps are well cut as well as the rest of his body. Bantan has battle scars all over his body, cuts, slashes and all sorts of blemishes from battles he has been in. His suit covers all but the one on his face. He wears a red scarf around his neck with strings twisted together hanging off of each end of the scarf.
Personality: Yabaku is anything but ordinary, he seems to lack a certain mental stability or what some would call a conscience, he disregards what's right and what's wrong for his own views. There are those who have a voice in their mind that seems to say, "that's enough" for Yabaku he silenced that little piece of crap years ago. His methods have seem to hampered his career for several years starting from when he was a Academy student. He can control himself around comrades. Through out the years he has learned how to control himself around comrades. Around enemies he does not care and will let lose upon them and destroy any obstacle in his path. If A comrade is in his way of destroying the enemy such as killing the enemy with no remorse he will simple knock them out the way but not kill them. Once he has comrades he would protect them with his life but while on his own he doesn't trust no one. It is hard to gain his trust so others will have a hard time convincing him unless he says otherwise.

However aside from this he puts off with quite a civil nature allowing those around him to believe him sane, his peers however and fellow partners in combat know quite the difference. He often dresses in a unique attire when off duty and visiting other nations, he seems to let himself become a target for those looking to pray on the weak and puts himself off as someone who can't handle his own. This lets him catch his opponents off guard and dispose of them how he sees fit with the claim of self defense.
Likes: civilized people,a strong opponent,fun
Dislikes: people in general, people who diss him,people who prey on the weak


Character Information

Rank: jounin(S rank)
Chakra nature:Bakuton, Fire, Earth(id assume since hes lived such a long time he would have 3 chakra natures <_<)
Country: EXIwagakure
Combat Strengths:
-He is very good in Taijutsu(Practically a master)
- He also has strengths in Fuinjutsu which are sealing techniques which he is very good at.
-He has the Bakuton ability which also gives him a major strength in battle since it is brute force.
-He is very fast.
Combat Weaknesses:

-He is weak against genjutsu but only to Genjutsu B rank or higher. Any C rank or below can not hold him.
-His Bakuton Chakra can not be placed in liquids like H2O.
-His love for his Comrades
Equipment:

Kunai-40

Shuriken-60

Paper bomb-80

pouch-holds items

Kunai case-holds Kunai x2 cases

Sunglasses-x1

White gloves-x1

wire-200 yards

Weapon: His gloves are lined with flint and using his ability to manipulate fire, he can make a few sparks into a small torrent of fire.
Element(s):Katon, Doton.
Jutsu:

Academy jutsu:

Tree Climbing - Genin

* Water Walking - Genin

* Body Flicker - Genin


kawarimi-body replacement



TWO CANON JUTSU(the rest are custom and are in the jutsu waiting list for approval)
Doro Gaeshi [Mud Overturn]
C rank
Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall. An alternative way to perform this technique is the user placing their hands to the ground to use this. Yabaku can implement his exploding Hijutsu into the wall to set a devastating trap.


Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu [Art of Earth Doppleganger]
D rank
Tsuchi Bunshin utilizes Doton to release a Bunshin made of Earth from the body. Pillars of rock that was originally chakra within the body is released and takes the form of a Clone. This Bunshin can perform numerous Doton Jutsu.

CUSTOM JUTSU

https://dawnofshinobi.rpg-board.net/t2594-bantan-yabakus-jutsu

The link above is to the ninjutsu you see below for proof they were approved.

Name:Chaos seal
Rank:S
Element:Katon
Type:Fuinjutsu
Description:This fuin seal was created by Bantan and was labeled as a forbidden jutsu. They say this ability was gifted to Bantan by the goddess of Chaos herself. Bantan never believed in any of the rumors that went on in Taki. The seals work by forming an imbalanced chakra with in the seals and release it in an explosion. These powerful seals of chaos can be placed on another with a touch of Bantan. In other words Bantan can give this power to others. How ever the power is said to be more than just a average forbidden jutsu. Some say the goddess of Chaos herself is seal inside the seals by Bantan. Bantan placed this seal on his feet and palms of his hands and his tongue. He can also place the Seal on other objects to make them explode.


Name:Body fusion
Rank:A
Element:none
Type:Ninjutsu
Description:After performing three hand seals, tiger, dragon, boar, Bantan can touch a solid object and form with it becoming the material the item is made of being either apart of the oject such as a boulder or his skin becoming the material the object is made of. If he touches a Kunai then he will be made of stainless steel. Same if he touched a rock, or boulder. This technique is mainly made to form into the stomach of the bird. This allows him to literally be apart of the bird being protected from on coming projectiles. He can then come out of hiding and attack with a counter attack. His skin only becomes 50% the strength of the original item absorbed so if he absorbed steel it would be up to 7 on the hardness scale.


Name:Doton bombs
Rank:B
Element:Doton
Type:fuinjutsu
Description:Bantan can simply either use the seals on the palm of his hand or the bottom of his foot. Using them he will form balls of earth from the ground and with his seals chakra in them he can turn them into A explosive bomb. They will hover above him and with the flick of his fingers he can send them one by one at an enemy and ignite them in an explosion. Even if they dodge the brunt of the blast the scattering shrapnel from stone will most likely hit them and tear away flesh.

Name:earth bomb Air strike
Rank:B
Element:Doton
Type:Fuinjutsu
Description:While Bantan is on his bird he can use his chakra through the seals on his feet to hollow out the stomach of the bird. Using that the softened dirt he broke up to make the stomach hollow will form into ball shapes. The bird will shoot them from his mouth out of his stomach. The affects of earth bombs have the same affect as they do on earth bomb air strike.


Name:Exploding kick(kibaku_ashige)
Rank:A
Element:Katon
Type:Fuinjutsu
Description:This has the same affect as exploding fist except with Bantans feet. This allows him to be able to use his feet or fist. He does this by activating the fuin seals on his feet. Doing so what ever he kicks will end in a explosive beauty. These kicks are very dangerous and deadly if hit with them. These kicks can blow a hole through what ever they land a kick on. However the explosion only explodes forward and the same goes for his exploding fist. It is like a claymore so the person behind the explosion is completely safe which is why Bantan is unharmed being so close to his own explosions.

Name:Earthly beast summon
Rank:A
Element:Doton
Type:Ninjutsu
Description:Bantan will create any animal,incests or reptiles of any size from the earth he chooses to aid him in battle. His main thing that he creates is a giant falcon so that he can fly up and get a arial view of his opponent and get the upper hand. These can also serve as deadly bombs that look like helpless animals. He can also create mounts such as giant birds from stone using this teechnique.


Name:
Yuubaku [誘爆 Induced Explosion]
Rank:B
Element:Katon
Type:Fuinjutsu
Description:This is Yabaku's signature style of Ninjutsu, on his palms are two seals which one releases a form of chakre induced with Katon while the other simply releases chakra. Yabaku will place his hands to one another and then to an object or onto the ground. Once done the two chakra will converge on one another slamming together to create a strong imbalance of chakra and fire with no containment causing a large explosion on the converging point, this technique can also be used in alteration to create timed or triggered explosions.




Name:Yabaku's Unnamed Bombing Technique
Rank:B
Element:Katon
Type:Fuinjutsu
Description:Utilizing Yuubaku, Yabaku can place his explosion technique into another object of any material except a liquid and can release the same effect into target object. Doing this he can turn any projectile into a deadly explosive that causes intense damage on exploding depending on its size and chakra, however even a simple kunai can prove life threatening.




Name:snap blast
Rank:B
Element:Katon
Type:Fuinjutsu
Description:Using his white gloves laced with flint he can create sparks when he utilizes using the katon element. Doing so he can create a torrent of flames to strike out at his opponent or an object. When made contact the fire will end in a combustion or in other words it will explode into more flames burning all in its radius. He can adjust how big the flame that emits from the sparks gets to up to a certain point of 20 meters.

Name:Tsuchi Bakuha Bunshin no Jutsu [Art of Exploding Earth Doppleganger]
Rank:A
Element:Katon
Type:Ninjutsu
Description:This is a variation of the Tsuchi Bunshin but it uses Yabaku's method of implementing explosions onto an object. When they take a sufficient amount of damage they will explode, they as well can explode on command.

Name:Tsuchiryuhiken no Jutsu [Art of Earth Reading]
Rank:C
Element:Doton
Type:Ninjutsu
Description:Doryuhiken is a skill that uses no handseals, but enables the user to read the Earth and feel things almost miles away. It's usually used as a early warning system, and is Iwa's answer to their own cloaking Jutsu.


Name:Doton: Yuubaku Tama [Earth Style: Induced Explosion Bullets]
Rank:B
Element:Doton
Type:Ninjutsu
Description:Yuubaku Tama can be used in multiple ways, this is a technique exclusive to Yabaku or whomever he may teach it to. He will form a set of In then place his hands to a section of earth, his exploding chakra will form in the earth and carve out various stones no smaller than a baseball. His palms will continue smacking the earth to release more stones, when in proximity to the intended target these stones will explode with the force relative to its size.


Name:Exploding fist(kibaku_genko)
Rank:B
Element:Katon
Type:Fuinjutsu
Description:Using the fuin seals on his palms nagato can release the seals ability to force a imbalanced chakra into an target and make them spontaniously combust.The seals when activated will emit a red aura around his fist which is only seen by the sharingan or byakugan.How ever, this technique allows him to do it on impact except the explosion isnt very big. It is a deathly blow however. How it works is; if Bantan is to punch someone it forcefully sends a instant flow of imbalanced chakra which is katon and regular chakra. Mixing the two together in such a short time causes them to explode. So when Bantan lands a hit it wont explode the front where he hit It will go through and explode out the back of where ever he hit. If he hits them in the face the back of their head will blow out, if he trusts a punch into their chest their back and spine will blow out with flames same as their head



Name: Binding of the Mighty Statue
Rank: S
Element: N/A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Description: This powerful technique Bantan and Mitsuki used hand in hand with the 9 Beast Sealing Statues. First and foremost this will not work unless a bijuu is somehow incapacitated via sleep, genjutsu, or beaten. If the beast is in a frenzy or can fight the sealing won’t be strong enough to hold them long enough. ::It only works on a bijuu::
Once weakened, this sealing can begin. It requires two people, one to begin the chinning process, that will bind the beast within the statue. The other to assist in the binding but also prepare the statue for it’s soon to be prisoner. Prep work is needed. After a set of identical hand signs both users hands will glow a deep deep blue. Once the statue is prepared the user doing that places a hand on the statute, leaving a hand print impression (crucial for any unsealing) also needed to act as the key to close the beast within. The Two then advance and once they physically touch the beast, the light blue cord or chain will attach to the beast and be attached to the users. Hundreds of blue chains will then erupt from the hands of the users wrapping the creature. Then, while holding the blue chakra chains around the creature, they both touch the statue.
Through the chains and the users as mediums, they can transfer the beasts chakra and essence into the statue that glows as it is filled. The users gain no chakra from the transfer. They do gain a connection to the statue. The two who lock the beast, will “feel” if the statue is disturbed or worse if the beast is released. They keep their hand on the chains and statue until the beast is completely sealed, then wrap the chains around the statue, one holds them there, while the other places their hand on the hand print impression and says and wills chakra to “LOCK” the statue. The chains then sink into the statue and become stone. Now it appears as though the Stone statue of the Bijuu is wrapped in stone chains and the obsidian eyes seem alive.....cause behind them they are.
The users are drained after this and it is very risky, should they be interrupted at any point the jutsu explodes, in a white concussive explosion blasting everything 200 yards back, taking down trees and carving scars in mountains from the amount of concentrated charka involved. Another risk is if done wrong a user can become wrapped in the chains, and locked with the statue as well..with the angry bijuu who really really wants their space..
And of course the bijuu could kill them before they have the chance to use the jutsu and all this is foe nothing.

The statues are indestructible once the bijuu is inside, protected by the bijuu’s power. The bijuu cannot be transferred from the statue, only released by the only unlocking jutsu that will work, and the proper sacrifice is used. Nor can the statue be stored in anything. Once the bijuu is inside, it cannot be moved in anyway. If acted upon in force the statue absorbs the chakra of the attack and sends it back at the user. violent physical force results in being shocked by high voltage red chakra. Regular contact results in no harm it’s when force is used on the statue with bad intent.


Name: 9 Beast Statue Release! The Key to The Cage
Rank: A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Once a Beast is sealed in a statue, a scroll is made and shoot from the top of it’s head in a beam of light that cannot be stopped, then it changes direction scattering from the statue. Inside all the scrolls contain this jutsu to unlock the beast’s, and the sacrifice needed for that particular beast. (I.e. A scroll from the two tails would tell you you need a cat sacrifice)
The justu requires a set of hand signs and focus of the hand. Deep red chakra glows like fire around the hand and the eyes glow the same way. Speaking the phrase that is inscribed on all statues “Free this beast, if the world is strong enough” and slamming the hand into the hand imprint begins the releasing. It takes some time and the user must not move their hand and push their chakra into it. Red cracks will appear on the statue, like spider webs. The eyes will glow the same deep red and the blue chains will appear...and fall to the ground around the statue. Then the stone will erupt in a red light explosion.
The statue is not lost forever, but remade and replaced in the scroll from which they originate, where it always is replaced unless the scroll is destroyed) The beast is now free but enraged, unable to tell it’s capture from it’s savior and goes on a rampage.
The one who uses this jutsu is drained to 10% charka and requires bed rest from the event, good luck surviving.

JUTSU SUMMONS

https://dawnofshinobi.rpg-board.net/t2595-tailed-beast-statue-summon

The link ABove is proof this summon was approved.

Single Summoning
Name: The 9 beast sealing statues
Gender: Male and female
Species: Each statue represents a replica of each tailed beast. Each beast has orbs on the stomach the one tail has one orb and the 2 tail has 2 orbs, and so one.
Type of summoning: Blood
Rank: S
Element:Depends on the tailed beast
Jutsu: In this single scroll which is a foot and a half long has Nine different seals on it and each seal must have a blood to summon which the user bites the thumb to summon. The one tail, two tail,three tail, four tail, five tail, six tail, seven tail, eight tail and the nine tails each have a statue replica statue sealed in each seal. If were going to seal one it has to be the statue fo that tailed beast so we would summon the one tail statue to seal shukaku in it. Each one can be summoned by biting the thumb and performing a chain of 9 hand seals then slamming the palm on to the seal in the scroll to summon the statue. Nothing can harm these statues nor can anyone act on them and once the bijuu is sealed inside the statue can not be unsealed nor can the statue itself be sealed after having a bijuu inside. The statue produces a barrier of the tailed beasts chakra around it.The barrier can only be released by Bantan or Mitzuki. Anyone touching the pure raw power of the bijuu chakra barrier will most likely be ate and burnt up from the raw power of the beast. The barrier itself is deadly. The only way to unseal the beast is by the animal that represents the type of animal the beast is. Doing so will release the barrier and the bijuu allowing it to roam free, then it must be defeated then resealed by who ever wants to steal its power.Now if the tailed beast has a host the host must be injured so that they can not fight it, then once they look at the statue that will activate the statues genjutsu. It will cast a genjutsu making them seem blind, it will then release a aura of chakra from the orbs on the stomach around them. Then Bantan and Shizuki will perform a hand seal and the sealing will begin to steal the bijuu from the host and put it inside its rightful statue. The host however will not die from this but will pass out from exaustion once the tailed beast is sealed. The orb will glow red once the beast is sealed. The orb itself has a fuinseal sealing technique which is put inside each orb, that is what emits the aura of chakra around the bijuu host to suck it from the hosts body while preventing movement. If the beast itself is in another object. It can simply absorb it out of the object its sealed in and placed in the statue. Other wise if its roaming free we must defeat and weaken the demon before beable to seal it in the statue.


Other Information

Relationships:none
Family:father


BACKGROUND

Bio:

Academy Years

Yabaku's birth comes from a shinobi family nestled within the heart of Iwagakure during times of heated aggression with the neighboring villages. This caused distant relations with his family and made any friendship he made short lived given the possibility of death amongst the collection of higher ranked ninja. The teachings in the academy were limited to the basic of classes with sub par teachers giving lessons given that all higher qualified shinobi were on the field shedding blood in the glory of Iwagakure. Being in the academy he has learned a lot from when he was in it. He perfected everything he had learned in the Academy.

Genin Years
Graduating from the academy was a fruitless effort, it was simply a rush to make sure that the children were going to be ready to handle more treacherous environments and be able to perform the minimalist of techniques to be able to qualify as a weapon. Yabaku's talent seem to derive from his grandfather's art of handling explosive weaponry which he attempted to turn into a set list of Jutsu. As he progressed to the Chunin ranks the wars were alive and well, a child of merely fifteen and he was being placed into some heated confrontation near the country side. He continued to deal with his targets in a crude an gruesome method causing attention to be taken away from any possibility of promotion at that time. The ranks meant nothing to him at the time, until they started to effect his works.

Chuunin Years
For nearly ten years he was remained at the book rank of Chunin being prevented from dangerous assignments given the nature of his style of combat. He was forced to prove he could control his techniques in small moderation to subdue opponents before he was allowed on the higher ranked assignments of A and S where he worked with other Jonin. Due to his progression in controling his methods he was able to get the teeth pulled enough to allow him to become the booming sensation of a Jonin.

His current goal is that of an Oinin which is seemingly out of the question given that his methods eradicate any evidence of a corpse, there seems to be dispute in this matter given his skills were perfect for an Oinin, however with a new Tsuchikage there were more possibilities on the horizon. He bide his time as he did the work most jounin would not. He did the special missions no one else wanted because, they were gutless. While out on a mission on a mission to assassinate a man in the grass country side. His village was ambushed by an unknown enemy. After assassinating the man he returned to his village only to see it in ruins. He balled up his fist in anger as he could see his comrades on the ground spread out through the country side. One was alive but only for a few moments for Bantan to reach him. The Tsuchikage. Bantan rushed over to him placing his arm under his head to prop it up. The Tsuchikage had given Bantan something. It was a scroll and what was inside was the villages hidden and forbidden jutsu. He was told to protect it with his life and Bantan agreed but soon after he agreed the Tsuchikage had died in his arms. Bantan fled the scene leaving and knew what to do. The scroll it self Obtained the Ability to Manipulate earth to the users command. Bantan was merely sixteen at the time this happened. Something had fallen out the scroll, it was a piece of parchment, it was a map. Bantan tried for years to learn how to read it until one day he figured the secret to the map out.


At the age of 18 Bantan had found something he thought he would never see which the map lead him to. It was magical. He had found the fountain of youth. Bantan drank from it and the fact that he had not really done any bad deeds or sins. The pool accepted him and granted him a long life to live to the age of 600. Bantan has lived years through out the ages learning and fighting different types of shinobi. He stood and watched as his village had fell and crumbled to dust before his eyes. He was the only survivor who had fled the villlage. He himself was the last of his type which was of the Bakuton users. He eventually found a way to give his abilities to others using fuinjutsu after studying it for years. Now he spends most of his days traveling in hopes to create himself a group of bakuton users and one day revive his Bakuton clan.

In his travels his chakra and his strength and his Bakuton abilities had strengthened to that of an S rank. He still held the rank of Jounin but because of his age he had, had years to learn and train. He spent most of his time studying the scroll. The only thing that was left of his village which was the scroll of hidden and forbidden jutsu. Years down the road he had mastered the forbidden jutsu of his village. This knowledge was for him to know and only him to know and he would keep it that way. It was entrusted to him who was the last survivor of the Stone village. Now he spends his years protecting the scroll and making sure that its secrets and the scroll was only known by him. To the rest of the world the scroll was a ghost. As years past the original villages such as the leaf, mist all of them had began to crumble. He had a few comrades but they died of old age while Bantan lived for a long time. New villages rose from new sentry of shinobi of these new times. It has been years. Bantan has seen many wars in his times through out the ages. He has seen many kages die in war protecting their village. Now days Bantan tends to keep to himself. Beinf 318 and being lone for so long he doesn't know this generation of shinobi. He knows not who he can and cannot trust.



SAMPLE ROLEPLAY: in the link below is my rp sample, its a rp i have done with this character on another rp site but i have permission to show this. let me know what you think of this rp.

http://s6.zetaboards.com/The_Shinobi_Rp_2/topic/8725891/1/

woot!

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His face has a scar of an X on it

Where is the X? o.o' Where on his face?

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he seems to lack a certain mental stability or what some would call a conscious

I think you mean 'conscience'. xD

Your Combat Weaknesses don't balance out your Strengths~ Your strengths are an entire art of ninja techniques, while your weaknesses are merely elements. ;/

Also, wouldn't it have been easier to simply copy the RP sample from that site to here? ;x It's tiresome to have to click it and then wait for it to load, and then read it in a different-colored background. ~.~;

The only major flaw in your profile is the strengths/ weaknesses, so apart from that, I guess you're fine~

edited my strength and weaknesses -_- and its not gonna be on the picture, the description is the main importance anyways. he has a scar of an x on his face ...IN the description....that is the way it is and i will keep his scarred fayce! D:

but specify where on the face the scar is. Is it on the cheek? on the eye where? other then that approved!

its in the middle of his face in between the eyes...Also I edited his age since iwa has been destroyed for 300 years....well I put his age at 375 but he looks 18 as for how he is able to live so long? I am going to think of something....i dunno what but I will think of something

I will look further into this profile when I have time.

~.~' It's insensible for there to be a 'Fountain of Youth'. It's also insensible for your character to NOT want to die after living for so long. But it's entirely probable, so it's okay.

However, if your character lived for so long and has practiced his techniques for that long... he should be God. o_o Anyway, wait for other people to look over it, since your profile's rather strong.

Looks good to me - approved

Remember, the staff will likely keep an extra eye on anything your character does, just because of its added uniqueness and how old he is.


Remember - If bookwoman stops by and sees something she wants changed it has to be changed

Bookwoman here. Prepare for the worst~

First of all, nice to meetcha. I'm Bookwoman, also called Asa, Asako, Booky and some more nicknames which I can't remember right now. I'm the head mod, which means I'm right under the admins~

Alrighty, let us begin the modding I guess now that formalities have been done. Just a warning: I'm quite harsh whenever I start and also a perfectionist. Please don't take it personally~

First of all,
About the scar issue, precise it in the profile and not just in a post where you explained it to a mod. Rare are the people who go read up the posts that a mod and the rper exchanged in a profile~

Second,
Your personality, apart from having erased his conscious, is a little vague. Maybe explain how he'd act around friends, foes, higher ups, allies etc? Maybe that can give us a better outline of who he is.

Thirdly,
Bakuton is a ninja art, that of blowing things up. Not a chakra nature. -Naruto wikied it- So, place it in your battle strengths.

Fourthly,
In your battle strength, add some things other than his personality traits or motivation. Like, what he uses in battle, what he is good in. Example: ninjutsu, strategy, high chakra reserves...I dunno. Just fill in~

Fifthly,
Razor wire is simple metal wire or something special? If it is special, make a thread in the weapons and items creation section~

Sixth,
Your history is short for someone who lived so long. Try to fill it somewhat more up? Like for example, make a section for when he was born till chuunin, then from chuunin till jounin, jounin travels through the world while not dying and finally now? It doesn't have to be huge, but giving some more details would be nice. I'm sure that while having lived for so long, he learned quite a lot and has some wisdom to share, no?~

As for the rest, maybe skip a line between your personality and your appearances, and you'll be fine~
Add your personal jutsu/summons in a link in your profile and you'll be free to go and spread terror in the world~

:3 Hope you will enjoy your time here and welcome once more to Dawn of Shinobi!

fixed the stuff you aksed

Well Lets start with the Jutsu and I am being brutal since the webmaster wants me to review this thoroughly.

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Name:Chaos seal
Rank:S
Element:Katon
Type:Fuinjutsu
Description:This fuin seal was created by Bantan and was labeled as a forbidden jutsu. They say this ability was gifted to Bantan by the goddess of Chaos herself. Bantan never believed in any of the rumors that went on in Taki. The seals work by forming an imbalanced chakra with in the seals and release it in an explosion. These powerful seals of chaos can be placed on another with a touch of Bantan. In other words Bantan can give this power to others. How ever the power is said to be more than just a average forbidden jutsu. Some say the goddess of Chaos herself is seal inside the seals by Bantan. Bantan placed this seal on his feet and palms of his hands and his tongue. He can also place the Seal on other objects to make them explode.

One you can't give knowledge of a certain ninja art to another person. That is like obtaining a completely new element to someone without any priror knowledge or training. God modding, Also what are the qualifications of the jutsu? If they are 20 meters away from you does the ability stop? Additionally none of your jutsu have a range of effect in which the jutsu template is mandatory.

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Name:Body fusion
Rank:A
Element:none
Type:Ninjutsu
Description:After performing three hand seals, tiger, dragon, boar, Bantan can touch a solid object and form with it becoming the material the item is made of being either apart of the oject such as a boulder or his skin becoming the material the object is made of. If he touches a Kunai then he will be made of stainless steel. Same if he touched a rock, or boulder. This technique is mainly made to form into the stomach of the bird. This allows him to literally be apart of the bird being protected from on coming projectiles. He can then come out of hiding and attack with a counter attack. His skin only becomes 50% the strength of the original item absorbed so if he absorbed steel it would be up to 7 on the hardness scale.

Now as for this technique forming into the material of any object you touch when using this jutsu is the same as obtaining use of any element. In example if you are a lighting type user using this jutsu you can take on the qualities of earth Lighting's weakness according to Naruto wiki. Not approved

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Name:Doton bombs
Rank:B
Element:Doton
Type:fuinjutsu
Description:Bantan can simply either use the seals on the palm of his hand or the bottom of his foot. Using them he will form balls of earth from the ground and with his seals chakra in them he can turn them into A explosive bomb. They will hover above him and with the flick of his fingers he can send them one by one at an enemy and ignite them in an explosion. Even if they dodge the brunt of the blast the scattering shrapnel from stone will most likely hit them and tear away flesh.

Your first jutsu the chaos seal one explains why they are explosive but those seals on your hands and feet do not have anything to do with manipulating earth since you even stated that your chaos seal is a Katon Fuinjutsu. So if you want to have something as complex as floating earthen bombs (B ranked) Handsigns will be required especially with the amount of control you have with the technique.

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Name:earth bomb Air strike
Rank:B
Element:Doton
Type:Fuinjutsu
Description:While Bantan is on his bird he can use his chakra through the seals on his feet to hollow out the stomach of the bird. Using that the softened dirt he broke up to make the stomach hollow will form into ball shapes. The bird will shoot them from his mouth out of his stomach. The affects of earth bombs have the same affect as they do on earth bomb air strike.

I have problems with this one just like I have problems with the last one. Your Chaos seal which is fire does not grant you ability to manipulate earth. Now as for the structure of the jutsu itself just because you soften up some dirt dosn't mean the bird your flying in can just spit them up at an opponent so Handseals again please and this jutsu wont be approved until the summon is approved.

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Name:Earthly beast summon
Rank:A
Element:Doton
Type:Ninjutsu
Description:Bantan will create any animal,incests or reptiles of any size from the earth he chooses to aid him in battle. His main thing that he creates is a giant falcon so that he can fly up and get a arial view of his opponent and get the upper hand. These can also serve as deadly bombs that look like helpless animals. He can also create mounts such as giant birds from stone using this teechnique.

Umm these are just earthen creatures you have manipulated. I can see you tried to replicate deidara here but here is where you screwed up on. One there is nothing here that states how they can be used as bombs your description only states that they are formed from earth.

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Yuubaku [誘爆 Induced Explosion]
Rank:B
Element:Katon
Type:Fuinjutsu
Description:This is Yabaku's signature style of Ninjutsu, on his palms are two seals which one releases a form of chakre induced with Katon while the other simply releases chakra. Yabaku will place his hands to one another and then to an object or onto the ground. Once done the two chakra will converge on one another slamming together to create a strong imbalance of chakra and fire with no containment causing a large explosion on the converging point, this technique can also be used in alteration to create timed or triggered explosions.

If an elemental based chakra meets normal chakra (even more so since it is your own) All it does is make more of that element. So it does not induce and explosion all that happens is that you place a large amount of fire chakra into the ground. Now you can do something like make a man made volcano since you do fit the requirements of the magma advanced bloodline however explosions can't be formed from this.

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Name:Yabaku's Unnamed Bombing Technique
Rank:B
Element:Katon
Type:Fuinjutsu
Description:Utilizing Yuubaku, Yabaku can place his explosion technique into another object of any material except a liquid and can release the same effect into target object. Doing this he can turn any projectile into a deadly explosive that causes intense damage on exploding depending on its size and chakra, however even a simple kunai can prove life threatening.

Can't be approved for the same reason as the one above.

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Name:snap blast
Rank:B
Element:Katon
Type:Fuinjutsu
Description:Using his white gloves laced with flint he can create sparks when he utilizes using the katon element. Doing so he can create a torrent of flames to strike out at his opponent or an object. When made contact the fire will end in a combustion or in other words it will explode into more flames burning all in its radius. He can adjust how big the flame that emits from the sparks gets to up to a certain point of 20 meters.

Alright as for this one if you already have a fire coming out snapping your fingers with flint gloves wont make the fire bigger. A spark will not make a fire bigger now if you were to pour gas on it then yes it will but flint is used to start a fire not make an existing one stronger.

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Name:Doton: Yuubaku Tama [Earth Style: Induced Explosion Bullets]
Rank:B
Element:Doton
Type:Ninjutsu
Description:Yuubaku Tama can be used in multiple ways, this is a technique exclusive to Yabaku or whomever he may teach it to. He will form a set of In then place his hands to a section of earth, his exploding chakra will form in the earth and carve out various stones no smaller than a baseball. His palms will continue smacking the earth to release more stones, when in proximity to the intended target these stones will explode with the force relative to its size.

Stated earlier by another mod Bakuton is not an element hence forth there is no such thing as Exploding chakra. Now along the lines of descriptions you left an important part out in the second sentence because I can't entirely understand it. You need to fix this.

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Name:Exploding fist(kibaku_genko)
Rank:B
Element:Katon
Type:Fuinjutsu
Description:Using the fuin seals on his palms nagato can release the seals ability to force a imbalanced chakra into an target and make them spontaniously combust.The seals when activated will emit a red aura around his fist which is only seen by the sharingan or byakugan.How ever, this technique allows him to do it on impact except the explosion isnt very big. It is a deathly blow however. How it works is; if Bantan is to punch someone it forcefully sends a instant flow of imbalanced chakra which is katon and regular chakra. Mixing the two together in such a short time causes them to explode. So when Bantan lands a hit it wont explode the front where he hit It will go through and explode out the back of where ever he hit. If he hits them in the face the back of their head will blow out, if he trusts a punch into their chest their back and spine will blow out with flames same as their head

First off your character name is off lols Nagato? Second I already stated the problem with mixing fire based chakra and normal chakra. Also if you force chakra into someone they can just disperse it with a well timed burst of their own chakra. Also with something as elaborate and difficult to pull off as this it is clearly A ranked.

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Name: Binding of the Mighty Statue
Rank: S
Element: N/A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Description: This powerful technique Bantan and Mitsuki used hand in hand with the 9 Beast Sealing Statues. First and foremost this will not work unless a bijuu is somehow incapacitated via sleep, genjutsu, or beaten. If the beast is in a frenzy or can fight the sealing won’t be strong enough to hold them long enough. ::It only works on a bijuu::
Once weakened, this sealing can begin. It requires two people, one to begin the chinning process, that will bind the beast within the statue. The other to assist in the binding but also prepare the statue for it’s soon to be prisoner. Prep work is needed. After a set of identical hand signs both users hands will glow a deep deep blue. Once the statue is prepared the user doing that places a hand on the statute, leaving a hand print impression (crucial for any unsealing) also needed to act as the key to close the beast within. The Two then advance and once they physically touch the beast, the light blue cord or chain will attach to the beast and be attached to the users. Hundreds of blue chains will then erupt from the hands of the users wrapping the creature. Then, while holding the blue chakra chains around the creature, they both touch the statue.
Through the chains and the users as mediums, they can transfer the beasts chakra and essence into the statue that glows as it is filled. The users gain no chakra from the transfer. They do gain a connection to the statue. The two who lock the beast, will “feel” if the statue is disturbed or worse if the beast is released. They keep their hand on the chains and statue until the beast is completely sealed, then wrap the chains around the statue, one holds them there, while the other places their hand on the hand print impression and says and wills chakra to “LOCK” the statue. The chains then sink into the statue and become stone. Now it appears as though the Stone statue of the Bijuu is wrapped in stone chains and the obsidian eyes seem alive.....cause behind them they are.
The users are drained after this and it is very risky, should they be interrupted at any point the jutsu explodes, in a white concussive explosion blasting everything 200 yards back, taking down trees and carving scars in mountains from the amount of concentrated charka involved. Another risk is if done wrong a user can become wrapped in the chains, and locked with the statue as well..with the angry bijuu who really really wants their space..
And of course the bijuu could kill them before they have the chance to use the jutsu and all this is foe nothing.

The statues are indestructible once the bijuu is inside, protected by the bijuu’s power. The bijuu cannot be transferred from the statue, only released by the only unlocking jutsu that will work, and the proper sacrifice is used. Nor can the statue be stored in anything. Once the bijuu is inside, it cannot be moved in anyway. If acted upon in force the statue absorbs the chakra of the attack and sends it back at the user. violent physical force results in being shocked by high voltage red chakra. Regular contact results in no harm it’s when force is used on the statue with bad intent.

First issue a bijuu is a manifestation of chakra in physical form and cannot be harmed by humans. They can be sealed but not harmed so incapacitating them is near impossible.
Second problem how long is the sealing process it took 7 S classed rouge shinobi at least a day to seal off the weakest of the bijuu. Also two S ranked shinobi would not be able to be the medium for a sealing technique. In the manga it shows with the battle with Ginkaku and Kinkaku that ninja cannot handle a bijuu's chakra completely. In the case of Jinchuuriki they take years to master and strengthen their resistance to such high amounts of chakra. This form of sealing would kill you both instantaneously. Even though you say that you gain no chakra from the sealing being a medium of the chakra means that it has to pass through you so you contradict yourself.
Third issue with the barrier of the Bijuu you seal. Just because the statue is capable of holding a bijuu does not mean that you can manifest its own chakra to be used as a protective barrier. By this logic when Jinchuriki are chosen they should automatically be able to use all of their bijuu's abilities and chakra immediately without training. Which is god mod. Also in accordance to the anime and manga you clearly see that even though the kyuubi for example is sealed within naruto, Naruto had to reach an impass with how to use the chakra since the kyuubi refused. Every time he used the chakra it was because the Kyuubi allowed it. Untill he learned to master the chakra completely after 16 almost 17 years of living with it. Anyone besides jinchuriki cannot handle a bijuu's chakra and even more so people will die from chakra poisoning.

The prospect of the fountain of youth is unfathomable three reasons as to why.

1. Stronger ninja then you during that time would have found it an monopolized it.

2. The shinobi world would have made that their top priority to obtain and would either have killed each other in order to obtain it or come up to an agreement that they would destroy it in a means to make it fair to each other.

3. With the idea of the fountain of youth you still are capable of dying. In order for you to survive throughout these many years with Akatsuki, War, rouges, coup't de etat, and the crumbling of the social structure of the shinobi world you would have to have been the strongest shinobi in the world. Your combat strengths and weaknesses do not pry for someone who would be capable of living through so many conflicts. Not to mention the whole buisness of the aftermath of the collapse of all of these old shinobi villages. No man would be able to survive 300 years in the shinobi world. Plus according to the site's plotline you would have to had survived a crazy dude using the bijuu to destroy the world. The task may have failed but the shinobi almost went extinct from this. So I dont care how old your character is from the many years you walked the earth, drinking from some fairy tale excuse does not mean some genin strait from the academy could have gotten lucky and stabbed a kunai through your eyes.

Now for the whole context of your jounin rank. You dont have anywhere in your bio that you were promoted or that you did anything or were seen as fit enough to be promoted to jounin. So fix that please.

Now for your combat strengths and weaknesses.

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Combat Strengths:
-He is very good in Taijutsu(Practically a master)
- He also has strengths in Fuinjutsu which are sealing techniques which he is very good at.
-He has the Bakuton ability which also gives him a major strength in battle since it is brute force.
-He is very fast.
Combat Weaknesses:

-He is weak against genjutsu but only to Genjutsu B rank or higher. Any C rank or below can not hold him.
-His Bakuton Chakra can not be placed in liquids like H2O.
-His love for his Comrades

You must be specific please love for his comrades is very difficult to argue as being a combat weakness. Plus you have only 2 liable weaknesses. Since you are a fire and Earth user the elements that combat against your designative elements are water and electricity. Also please explain clearly in your bio how you obtained proficiency in fuinjutsu and all your other combat strengths and weaknesses. Like the other mods and admins have stated your 318 you should be able to say a lot more then anyone else on the site in your bio.

the body fusion technique does not work like that D:< i can only take form of material like metal, stone, etc. I cant take on the propertis of elements =\

As for you saying you see nothing on how i became jounin? look below

or nearly ten years he was remained at the book rank of Chunin being prevented from dangerous assignments given the nature of his style of combat. He was forced to prove he could control his techniques in small moderation to subdue opponents before he was allowed on the higher ranked assignments of A and S where he worked with other Jonin. Due to his progression in controling his methods he was able to get the teeth pulled enough to allow him to become the booming sensation of a Jonin.

Then where is your Jounin arc? You specified your genin,chuunin and academy student arcs your jounin arc should be the same and technically should be the longest.