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Ichiban Genkaku
Posts : 28 Type : Ketsuekigakure Rank : Genin
| Subject: Ichiban Genkaku Sat Jan 30, 2010 2:44 pm | |
| General Information
Name: Ichiban Genkaku
Bloodline: Genkaku
Age:13
Height:5 feet 8 inches
Weight:105 pounds
DOB:7th, January
Appearance:He wears his simple tattered cloak thats black. He likes to keep it on regardless of its poor condition. Under that he has a black, old style leather shirt, pants, and boots that are slightly reinforced with a thin plate of steel, that is scaled at the joints so he can move. This light armor allows him to move about silently and quickly, while also having a fair amount of protection.
Bio:(Academy Arc) As an academy student of Ketsuekigakure he had a hard time. He had at many points been given tough decisions that even at this young age were life and death. The military like village in which he lived in was a place of brutality, teaching its younglings of the brood how to survive the harsh realities of the world, so that they seemed like normal everyday life. He was immediately enrolled in the Academy, and was one of the more dangerous students. One day however, when he went to sleep, he went into a coma. He never discusses what happened in his coma but it seems when he awoke from it he had unlocked a bloodline. With the new bloodline he grew even more confident and climbed his way up the Academy Latter Rank with this new confidence. After he passed the genin exam he was immediately was trained by his clan members to unlock his bloodlines secrets, and then he was truly ready for the life of a genin.
(genin arc)After his ordeal with the coma as an Academy Student he began training as a genin. He spent many years training his bloodlines element, and training the strange combination of fighting styles his clan had used. He has just barely scratched the surface of his genin life, and now the rest is to be determined by fate.
Personality:He appears very drowsy, in the mystic sort of way because of his bloodline. He seems to be very active at night, and because of the life spent in his village he laughs at situations that would seem "Out of his league", even to high ranking ninja. He is not disturbed by the fact that he could die, because he is well aware that it could happen but the constant training of hardships and unfairness has steeled his mind and body to pain or fear. This in a way though is also a weakness.
Likes:Nighttime
Dislikes:Fire
Ninja Information
Rank:Genin
Village:Ketsuekigakure
Combat Strengths:Weapon Fighting, Genjutsu (High resistance as well), Some Ninjutsu, speed.
Combat Weaknesses:He is a bit weak to fire because of his bloodline. Also his village ways have taught him to endure the pains and unfairness of the world. Often times he can ignore pain, and in doing so can sometimes cause him more damage than he realizes, like a cut thats too deep but wont register as pain.
Mental Strengths:Calm in intense situations that would normally cause fear. High resistance Genjutsu of any form, but not total Immunity.
Mental Weaknesses:Also making a mental weakness the ways of his village have caused him to show a lack of fear, meaning in some situations where he should run away, his mind doesn't register that emotion and he remains in the danger situation, which could kill him in the end.
Equipment:
-Kunai x20 (Left Hidden Sleeve Pocket Pouch) -Shuriken x20 (Right Hidden Sleeve Pocket Pouch) -Ninja Wire 50 feet (Hidden Sleeve Reel) -Sleeping Poisons x10 (Left Leg Pocket Pouch)
Jutsu:
Name:Clone Technique Art:Ninjutsu Rank:E Element:None Description:This is an exact copy of the user. It is used to fool an opponent, giving the user a chance to escape or make a surprise attack. These clones aren't real, and cannot take or deal physical damage.
Name:Transformation Technique Art:Ninjutsu Rank:E Element:None Description:This is a technique that transforms the user into another person, or if practiced enough another shape or object. It is used for a multitude of reasons, mainly one being to spy or confuse a person.
Name:Replacement Technique Art:Ninjutsu Rank:E Element:None Description:This technique will be used as a means to avoid harm or danger, being performed right before impact of an enemy strike or jutsu.
Name:Snake Blade Style Art:Weapon Fighting Syle Rank:D Element:None Description:This is a basic blade fighting style with sleeping toxins coating the blade, so that eventually after enough strikes have been made the opponent could fall asleep, which aids Ichiban's style even further. The blade is usually hidden from sight until the moment of striking, like a snake.
Name:Munashii Boushi Activation Art:Doujutsu Rank:D Element:None Description:This is the simple gathering of chakra to activate the Munashii Boushi.
Name:Bite Mark Technique Art:Doujutsu/Fuuinjutsu Rank:D Element:None Description:This is the simple technique thats used to inject the Genkaku chakra into an opponent or person. This is done by biting the opponent, afterward a seal is left in the area the person was bit.
Name:Disease Bite Art:Genjutsu Rank:D Element:None (must have Genkaku chakra) Description:This genjutsu is activated right after the Bite Mark Technique is made. The chakra is received by the opponent and the opponent believes that blisters start appearing on the skin, popping and spreading puss that causes more infection.
Name:Ice Storm Art:Genjutsu Rank:D Element:Ice (must have Genkaku chakra) Description:This genjutsu is used when the opponent is under the Bite Mark Effect. The person is thrown into an ice storm in which they continue to wonder forever. A strange thing though, the snow seems to only blow in one direction.
Name:Six Eyes of the Void Art:Ninjutsu Rank:C Element:Ice Description:This jutsu is used in conjunction with the activation of the Munashii Boushi. Three ice mirrors are created and put up around the opponent at angles. Ichiban will then stand behind one of the three mirrors while his Munashii Boushi is activated. This creates a fun house effect, where all three mirrors now show the reflection of Ichiban. The jutsu is simple to get out of, just by simply breaking one of the mirrors. What makes it hard is that the alluring eyes of the Munashii Boushi are now not just one pair, but three pairs. The trick is for the opponent to get out in time, lest he be tempted by the eyes and looks at them.
Element(s):Ice (Kekkei Genkai)
Other Information
Jutsu note~ I know what your thinking about one of the jutsu. It says "bite" but the type says Doujutsu. Well we are all so used to Doujutsu being eye bloodlines that most of you don't pay attention to the fact that Doujutsu means Body Art, so just in case you didn't realize this read it here. Doujutsu can be any special ability that is utilized by any part of the body.
Relationships:None
Family:Parents(Unknown)
Last edited by Ichiban Genkaku on Mon Feb 22, 2010 12:46 pm; edited 12 times in total | |
| | | Kazuki Hatoba
Posts : 1232 Type : none Rank : Genin Elements : Lightning
| Subject: Re: Ichiban Genkaku Sat Jan 30, 2010 2:55 pm | |
| I am a little worried about how you say that you are good at nin,tai,and gen but anways approved unless said so by another mod | |
| | | Ichiban Genkaku
Posts : 28 Type : Ketsuekigakure Rank : Genin
| Subject: Re: Ichiban Genkaku Sat Jan 30, 2010 3:26 pm | |
| Thats not uncommon. Several in the manga could use all 3 and some even used them as a combo together. Besides I made my character so that he likes using only Taijutsu and Ninjutsu. Its just like any other ninja. They all have the ability to use the 3 different styles they just have their preferred jutsu style. Not everyone is a rock lee and stuck with only one profession. | |
| | | Kazuki Hatoba
Posts : 1232 Type : none Rank : Genin Elements : Lightning
| Subject: Re: Ichiban Genkaku Sun Jan 31, 2010 3:02 am | |
| well not trying to be rude I misread your profile and thought that you were adept in all forms of fighting. Now you still need a second approval | |
| | | Yakate Council of Four
Posts : 1347 Type : The best ones Rank : Kage ish Elements : Depends
| Subject: Re: Ichiban Genkaku Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:51 am | |
| Taijutsu shouldn't be added into your combat strengths unless you actually have jutsus for taijutsu. xD
Your bio says you started in Sunagakure, but your profile doesn't say you're village is Suna. Hint: All Haini Kettou bloodline users have originated at Hidden Sand.
Also, we are 300 years in front of Naruto timeline. o.o; Just mention what day and month your character was born, not year.
Otherwise, I deem it fine. Although I strongly suggest someone look over it again. o.o~ | |
| | | Hyosuke Asako
Posts : 659 Type : Sunagakure Rank : Sannin Elements : Poison mainly
| Subject: Re: Ichiban Genkaku Sun Jan 31, 2010 7:37 am | |
| Erm, your character has only one weakness, and that is genjutsu. Please add some more, because you have more than one strength.
Hi-to Shikaku~Heat Vision: I got a question about that one. Is it always activated? Can he only see with heat vision?
Kaen Sentou no Jutsu - Blazing Spire Technique: I got a question about this one: can you mive the pillar of fire, or is it immobile in front of you? And can the user run away after he created the pillar, or does he have to keep it's hands on the ground?
And your equipment, in what is it? A hip pouch, a bag? And your oil canisters, what do they exactly? Explode in the face of someone, or are they just used to make the fire spread more easily?
And you need to be in Sand, logically and leave it if you want to be in another village later on~ Since your whole history happens there.
Otherwise, I like your jutsus and biography. Your personality is nice too. So, please fix/answer the things I told you about and I'll approve~ | |
| | | Yakate Council of Four
Posts : 1347 Type : The best ones Rank : Kage ish Elements : Depends
| Subject: Re: Ichiban Genkaku Sun Jan 31, 2010 7:43 am | |
| Ehh, she's right. o-o Hence my strong recommendation to let someone else check your profile. xD | |
| | | Ichiban Genkaku
Posts : 28 Type : Ketsuekigakure Rank : Genin
| Subject: Re: Ichiban Genkaku Sun Jan 31, 2010 1:00 pm | |
| Yaka~
-I do have a Taijutsu you might want to check again o.o Also I didn't use up all my jutsu slots, so you could probably take from that that I plan on learning or training more in the forum, just so I have something to do.
-I made the profile before he made it official what the village would be, so I had to go back and edit when I found out from the bloodline creator, thus I had to wait myself, i'm not an idiot lol if thats what you were thinking, i know it didn't make sense but nothing I could do about it till I was informed.
-as for the date of birth thing, I could sworn it said month and year and I thought well they must want irl DOB or something so thats what I put XD. Guess not. But yea thats fixed.
~Asako
-Gave myself two other weakness that I forgot to put (blooodline weakness)
-Explained the heat vision thing
-Put locations for the items and the oil canisters simply just hold the oil. Cause you know its a canister so theres not much else it can be used for except containing things. That and by not giving the oil canisters a specific "thing" I can maximize their usefulness. For example I can simply just "Constantine pulls out one of his oil canisters and coats multiple shuriken in oil before igniting them with his Fire element and launching them at the opponent" or I could "Constantine takes one of his oil canisters and throws it at the opponent, launching a small fireball at the canister and igniting the oil inside, making it explode. This showers the area over the opponent with small fireballs and hot pieces of metal." Those are just examples, but you can see what I mean. By just simply having a Canister that holds the oil, I can use them for any purpose, instead of giving such a simple item such a specific task, and limiting its overall usefulness.
-Bloodline creator made a solution to the Blazing Spire Technique, so the solution is in the description on both my profile and in the description thats in the bloodline application.
-I fixed the sand problem, I had to wait myself before putting what village I was in because when I made the profile the village of our bloodline wasn't actually decided, at least not that I knew of. I had to go back and edit later after I was told what village so please once again, don't think I'm stupid or anything XD.
Thats about everything you asked though. Really some of those concerns like the items and oil canister was just common sense, er not that i'm trying to offend you by saying that, just suggesting that perhaps everything such as those simple things don't need an explanation since its...well simple o.o -shrugs- and if they are required then thats fine its no big deal. | |
| | | Hyosuke Asako
Posts : 659 Type : Sunagakure Rank : Sannin Elements : Poison mainly
| Subject: Re: Ichiban Genkaku Mon Feb 01, 2010 8:25 am | |
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| | | Ichiban Genkaku
Posts : 28 Type : Ketsuekigakure Rank : Genin
| Subject: Re: Ichiban Genkaku Thu Feb 18, 2010 11:36 pm | |
| o.o Restarted My character so it needs two new approvals! | |
| | | Yakate Council of Four
Posts : 1347 Type : The best ones Rank : Kage ish Elements : Depends
| Subject: Re: Ichiban Genkaku Mon Feb 22, 2010 10:14 am | |
| o.o A jutsu that creates a seal upon the victim's body is called Fùinjutsu, be it a seal created by biting someone, or by gazing at someone for a long time, or just placing one with your palm.
If your bloodline is approved, so is your character, I guess. o-x' | |
| | | Ichiban Genkaku
Posts : 28 Type : Ketsuekigakure Rank : Genin
| Subject: Re: Ichiban Genkaku Mon Feb 22, 2010 12:41 pm | |
| o.o I'll label it as a Doujutsu/Fuuinjutsu. I don't actually place the seal intentionally in the jutsu, the seal appears there, kinda like a tag so i know who i've bitten and who I haven't. In other words the seal isn't actually the cause or source for the jutsu, its just kinda like tabs.
And before anyone asks I'll say it now, no getting bit doesn't given you any uber, overly powerful chakra/abilities of any sort like that op Curse Seal. All it does is make you vulnerable to my genjutsu. | |
| | | Hyosuke Asako
Posts : 659 Type : Sunagakure Rank : Sannin Elements : Poison mainly
| Subject: Re: Ichiban Genkaku Mon Feb 22, 2010 3:42 pm | |
| o-o After your bloodline got approved, I'll approve your character too~
Just watch out ot keep your genjutsu resistance at your rank/strength level though~ But I'm sure you know about all that~ ^^ | |
| | | Ichiban Genkaku
Posts : 28 Type : Ketsuekigakure Rank : Genin
| Subject: Re: Ichiban Genkaku Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:25 pm | |
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