Uchiha, Raijin [Done]

Your weaknesses and strengths are unbalanced. ;/ I know this is W.I.P., but I'm pretty sure you wouldn't have changed these. Weaknesses need to be... well... weaker. o_o

Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Soushuriken no Jutsu - Manipulate Shuriken Technique
Rank: D
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Supplementary
Soushuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used Uchiha Sasuke. After hurling his giant shuriken, Sasuke can control their path and movements by using wires which run from the shuriken itself back to his arm. Because his opponent will think they are normal shuriken, they will be off guard about their ability to redirect themselves.

Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Katon jutsu such as this are seen as a rite of passage into adulthood for Uchiha clan members. Once the member can manipulate fire, they are finally recognized as no longer being a child.

Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.

Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.

Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Range: Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.

Soudai Hidama – Grand Fireball
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m ~ 15m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Soudai Hidama is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. The ninja will perform hand seals and expel a jet of Fire that will shape into a large Fireball. Sent towards the opponent, the massive ball of Fire will explode on contact, sending flames across the area.

Atsusa Misairu – Heat Missile
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m ~ 15m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Atsusa Misairu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. The Ninja will perform hand seals and expel a large volume of Fire that will shoot out in the shape of a missile. Up to four missiles can be shot at the opponent.


Chidori - Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Chidori (a.k.a. Raikiri) is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Hatake Kakashi utilizing the Lightning Element. Chidori allows him to cut through any foe. Later, Uchiha Sasuke used his Sharingan and the training of Kakashi to also learn the technique. It was given the nickname Raikiri after it was said Kakashi used the technique to cut a lightning bolt in two. Chidori is used for assassination purposes. Activating the body to focus chakra to the hand, Kakashi and Sasuke's hand become enveloped by an electrical force. This force is their chakra altered in nature to an electrical current. By altering the shape of the force, similar to an electrical discharge, they can decide the power and range of the attack.

After concentrating all the chakra into the arm, Kakashi and Sasuke use their quickness and the power of the thrust from the chakra to pierce any object with the extended forearm. Because their opponent can easily counter the attack, it requires a Sharingan user to make the technique worthwhile. The Sharingan will allow them to predict any moves their opponent decides to make and send their strike home into the target. Due to the high speed, the force emits a sound like a thousand birds chirping which gave the technique its name. Because of the great amount of chakra needed to utilize the technique, the technique can only be used so many times during the day.

Chidori Eisou - Thousand Birds Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m-10m)
Type: Attack
Chidori Eisou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning element. The Ninja is able to shape the Lightning Element to form an extending spear of lightning. Though unstated, this spear probably takes on Chidori's characteristics, including it's ability to cut through anything which stands in its path, allowing the sword to strike its target with ease. This attack may also be similar to Chidori Nagashi, causing the target to go numb from the electrical charge.

Chidori Nagashi - Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Chidori Nagashi is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning element. Instead of merely focusing the electrical force to his body, the Ninja is able to extend it outside of their body and through objects which they are holding. This allows tthe Ninja to create a protective zone around their person. This zone of electricity can shock and immobilize their foes, presumably by attacking their nervous system.


Chidori Senbon - Thousand Birds Needles
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m-10m)
Type: Attack
Chidori Senbon is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning element. The Ninja is able to shape the Lightning Element to form senbon. Though unstated, these needles probably takes on Chidori's characteristics, including it's ability to cut through most anything which stands in its path.

Chidori Hishou – Thousand Bird Flight
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m-10m), Far (10m ~ 15m)
Type: Attack
Chidori Hishou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning element. The Ninja will charge Raiton chakra in their hand and form a disc that will envelop their hand. They will then send the disc hurling towards the opponent. The disc takes on the Chidori’s characteristics and can cut through mostly anything in its path. Using more chakra and using one more seal can enable the disc to instantly increase in size.

Kangekiha - Inspiration Wave
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack, Defense
Raiton • Kangekiha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. The Ninja will form the needed hand seals and emit a bolt of electricity, directing it towards their opponent.

Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Lightning Element Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes lightning to create a Kage Bunshin clone. Because it is a Kage Bunshin, the Raiton version shares the ability to interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Raiton Kage Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into its natural lightning state. Like in other Lightning Element attacks, should the target come into contact with the electricity, they will be momentarily stunned.


Magen • Kasegui no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Shackling Stakes
Rank: B
Note: Special Bloodline Technique
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
Magen • Kasegui no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. After activating their Sharingan, the clan member will look into the eyes of their target to bind them with a paralyzing illusion. This illusion takes the form of giant spikes which stake them in place and restrict their movement. A powerful enough ninja will be able to fight the bind to give themselves an opportunity to gain freedom.

Magen • Kyouten Chiten - Demonic Illusion • Mirror Heaven and Earth Change
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
Magen • Kyouten Chiten is a Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. Using the copy and counter functions of the Sharingan eye, the Uchiha clan member can stop the sensory spell cast on their body and reverse it back on their opponent.

As Yakate said, your strengths and weaknesses are unbalanced.

Also, Omon Souran is kind of Overpowered. To just control people like that? Try to set a drawback or something of the such. If not, completely remove it.

I deleted the Mind Control and I added one more weakness.

Alright, accepted, bro-ham