Raijin Uchiha [Done]

Subject: Raijin Uchiha [Done] Sat Mar 19, 2011 6:17 pm

Uchiha,Raijin

Raijin Uchiha [Done] Younger-madara-madara-uchiha-5094629-408-471

General Information

Name: Uchiha Raijin
Nickname: Shining Bolt of The Storm (Arashi no shaininguboruto,嵐のシャイニングボルト)
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Height: 6'3ft
Weight: 178lb
DOB: April 18
Appearance: Raijin Uchiha is a handsome young man, much like most of the other Uchiha men. He has a tan colored skin complexion that gives out off a nice shine when he's around a certain brightness such as lightning flashes and the radiant Sunlight. Over the few months that passed Raijin's hair has grown longer, spiked down to a shoulder level. The eyes are of a hazel color still. Raijin still has his natural physique; athletic and lean...

Instead of wearing the sleeveless black colored shirt, he now wears a black open collared long sleeve with a much larger Uchiha clan symbol on the back. The sleeves do not go down to his wrists so this allows him to wear two black wrist bands and gloves. Not much has changed about his bottom half; he still wears armor padding that hang over his thighs beneath the dark gray cloth that also hangs down to his knees. He also wears his black pants with black leg warmers and the average shinobi sandals. Although this is Raijin's usual outfit he wears a black hooded cloak at all times over the main garments.

Personality: Raijin's former personality has changed over the time that has passed. The young man who was once the comedic relief during the ventures of the Kagumo is now a loner pursuing the same goal as before, to find his brother and avenge the death of his family. Raijin abandoned his childish personality and has become a serious shinobi. During this change he has shown an increase in wisdom and displays great intuition. Same as before, Raijin is very intelligent and is a very powerful shinobi...

Likes: Raijin likes to relax and sit by himself, enjoying views of various landscapes he comes across. He also likes seafood! This could explain why he resides in coastal villages during his travels. One of the last things Raijin likes is learning more jutsu to use and learning about the secrets of the world, an example being the secrets behind the Sharingan.

Dislikes: There are many dislikes that Raijin has. One of his main dislikes is his brother. He doesn't like those who are conceited and perverted. The last thing he dislikes greatly, are people who have the potential to become great but choose to do nothing with their lives...

Character Information

Rank: S-Rank Missing Ninja from Aurora.
Country: Rogue Shinobi of The Marsh country.
Combat Strengths: Incredible speed, Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu, and Genjutsu.
Combat Weaknesses: Doesn't have that much stamina even though he's fast, Taijutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Senjutsu, Suiton and Fuuton release.
Equipment:
• 5x Smoke bombs
• 15x Kunai
• 10x Shuriken
• 10x Bomb Tags
• 2x Eleven meter wire
• 1x Medical pouch: Bandages, Antidote for weak poison and the poison of different animals, Antivenom, Alcohol.

Weapon:
1) Sword of the Gathering Clouds of Heaven (天叢雲剣,Ama-no-Murakumo-no-Tsurugi) - The Sword of the Gathering Clouds of Heaven is a Kusanagi that is said to have been created by Raijin the Lightning God himself. Made from a single lightning bolt, this Kusanagi has a stainless white metal that can cut through most of the hardest materials in the world. It can be enveloped by Raijin's lightning to cut through mostly anything. (Other RP custom weapons not included.) When powered by lightning the blade glows a Golden color and has the same cutting power and ability of Chidori Spear. The Kusanagi can also return to it's wielder without being held.

2) Storm Chain (ストームチェーン, Sutōmuchēn) - The Storm Chain is a Kusarigama in the possession of Raijin. It's basically a sickle with a chain attached to the end which is connected to a thirty pound weight. Besides the fact that it can be used in sync with Raijin's lightning, the weapon cannot be held by another person; it will be too heavy for them. (Like Thor's hammer.) A special seal band allows Raijin to summon forth the weapon.

Element(s): Katon and Raiton.

Jutsu:

Spoiler:

Other Information

Relationships: None.
Family: Daisuke Uchiha - Cousin

BACKGROUND

The Birth of Raijin...
Deep within the mountainous region of the Snow Country in the temple of Sanda and Raitoningu, a child was being born. During the time of labor a blizzard had hit. The crackles of thunder and the screaming of Suira created an unsettling atmosphere. Lightning ravaged parts of the mountain side, frightening nurses. Then it happened, the child's head exited the mother and into the medic's hands, Raijin was born! The storm had died down and all that was left was a calm snowfall. Denko, the father of the child watched with such a happiness that he had started to cry. Izun watched his brother cry and get his umbilical cord cut off. He did not show any emotion at all....

After a few years Raijin and his family moved back to society, moving in with Denko's close friend in Aurora. Though he had Uchiha family in the village, he wasn't at good ties with them. Izun was one of the best Genin by the time Raijin was six. That was the time where he started to teach Raijin about the shinobi world and how ninja fight to protect others. Raijin was so interested he begged his parents to enroll him in Aurora's academy, which they did two years later. So when he was eight he was already an Academy Student on his way to becoming a shinobi.

Academy Student/Genin Arc..
The Academy wasn't so bad, Raijin was getting along with the other students, but not all of them. Raijin's direct family had the bad reputation of being unable to use the Sharingan. Only the main family could awaken it. Knowing this many of the bullies had insulted the boy and his family. Raijin didn't understand the Sharingan part but he still was abused. It didn't stop him from learning about many villages and even learning how to use jutsu!

Raijin's knowledge had earned him some friends; a boy named Fritsu and a girl named Yukina, though she was called Yuki for short. They became great friends and learned from each other. Raijin taught them what his brother did to him and he even told them many jokes. Together they graduated from the Academy and became Genin.

Three years of training and a break from school had passed. Raijin was a certified Genin of Aurora and proud. He was assigned to team four, and boy was he surprised when he found out that Yuki and Fritsu were on his team. Their sensei was a beautiful and strong female named Lin. They all took on many missions and at the end of the day Raijin recieved combat training from Izun, who was now an ANBU. Izun taught him how to utilize Fire jutsu and how to use weapons in a battle.

In that same year Raijin and the team were assigned an A-Rank mission where they had to retrieve a hostage from an infamous shinobi named Bachi Zenkai. That's when Raijin awakened the Sharingan for the first time! Something that shocked the village when they recieved word. If Raijin was of the minor family, how did he awaken the Doujutsu? After that some main family members put Raijin under close surveillance...

A year later the Chuunin Exams came around and all the Genin were put to the test. Every single Genin was forced to survive in the mountains under harsh conditions and reach the arena. Raijin and his team made, despite the fact that they were attacked by other shinobi and beasts. In the arena Raijin and his team were put against the other teams and three other teams made up of dangerous C-Rank criminals. Raijin had fought using the techniques his brother taught him and even transformed his Sharingan into the next stage. He and his team had become Chuunin two days after.

Chuunin Arc...
Raijin was becoming popular and popular by the day. The main family started noticing his skill and called him the prodigy of the sub family, however, some still disliked him. Izun was proud of his brother and continued teaching him. They both left the village to train, promising to return three years later.

As a result of training Raijin unlocked his second element, Lightning. Raijin not only became a better shinobi..he became a better swordsman. Returning at the age of fifteen, Raijin joined his team once again and took on many more missions. Yuki and Fritsu were in a relationship and poor Raijin, who had feelings for the girl was left with no one..

Jounin Arc..
Raijin started to take on missions alone or sometimes with his sensei. Fritsu and Yuki were too busy focusing on their relationship. Noticing his skill, Lin had brought Raijin to the Kage and told her about the boy, asking her to promote him to Jounin. The Kage accepted the request and promoted him. With the new rank Raijin felt like he was stronger than Fritsu and Yuki.

Behind the scenes, some main family members of the Uchiha hired Izun to kill off the sub family members to prevent what happened with Raijin from happening again. Izun accepted and on one night killed off the sub family, including his mother and father. An infuriated Raijin battled his brother with a stronger Lightning and evolved his sharingan during the brawl! Unfortunately, Raijin wasn't able to defeat his brother; he had escaped. No one had come to Raijin's aid which enraged him more! Hoping to catch his brother, Raijin followed, leaving his village....

Kagumo Arc...
Now considered a Missing Ninja by the ANBU, Raijin could not return. He was left with nothing but the goal of finding Izun and killing him! While wandering the lands for two years Raijin encountered an infamous shinobi named Yajusame Suikazan. He joined a mercenary organization called Kagumo and together they found a third member, Touzoku Bakari.

With Kagumo, Raijin was shown the life of a rogue shinobi. They took on bounties and earned money by killing. Yajusame and Raijin were close friends even though they were completely different. All of that changed in the village of Mabushii....

Taking on a high ranked bounty mission, Raijin and the crew invaded Mabushii. Yajusame believing that he had completed the mission was killed by a poison and torn apart by the savage gangsters. Touzoku and Raijin battled Youji and with a battle left unfinished, they both left the village. Touzoku turned on Raijin hoping to turn in Raijin's head to those who wanted it. The attempt was a failure, Raijin had killed him and had taken his body. Now Raijin searches for his brother and the secrets of the Uchiha....

Subject: Re: Raijin Uchiha [Done] Sun Mar 20, 2011 4:29 pm

Bump that baby.

Subject: Re: Raijin Uchiha [Done] Sun Mar 20, 2011 5:49 pm

o_o;...Uhm. It might be cuz I dun know about it, but, did you make an rp sample to prove you can rp at the level of a S-rank rogue ninja? Or did someone from the staff say you could have the rank?

Subject: Re: Raijin Uchiha [Done] Sun Mar 20, 2011 6:11 pm

I made an RP sample for this character before they deleted the whole app. I'm currently doing my RP sample for this new app though.

Subject: Re: Raijin Uchiha [Done] Sun Mar 20, 2011 6:37 pm

o.o Alright~ Make it and link us to it and I'll do the real mod job then :3

Subject: Re: Raijin Uchiha [Done] Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:38 pm

Deep in the flooded bottom land of the Marsh Country lurked the solitary Uchiha. Once a former mercenary is now a wanderer searching for the only sibling who still holds the breath of life. Ever since that dreadful day Raijin has shown no sign of emotion, as if he has been broken down to a mindless shinobi. Darkness was falling faster than he expected; if he didn't make it to the Swamp Village in time he would end up falling prey to the nocturnal beasts of these dangerous lands...

Raijin walked at a quickened pace, his face concealed in the shadow of the hood and his body covered by the black cloak. With the darkness around aiding him with his camouflage, spotting this rogue was going to be a difficult task. However, the crafty serpents that populated these swamps are excellent hunters and can detect heat signatures. No matter though, no beast is a match for an experienced shinobi.

As he continued walking down the illuminated path set before him eerie cries grew louder and louder. "What could be making that awful sound?" Raijin slowed down, deciding to take a cautious approach. When he was finally close to the source he couldn't believe the sight before him. About four were mutilating a young female and tossing her limbs into the nearby water body where large Alligators fed. Such degrading actions required justice! The men turned to Raijin grinning, blood seeping between their teeth. Were these men even human?

Raijin's hand slowly moved for the hilt of the Kusanagi; this was going to be a quick kill. Unsheathing the weapon Raijin stepped forward, the sole of his sandal pressing against the moist soil. The four men tossed the rest of the body, at least whatever was left of it, aside and grabbed their weapons. Before they can move any further Raijin had swiftly moved through the gap of two of the four, delivering a fatal slash that dismembered the torso from the waist. The two men collapsed, leaving two alive. "I'll make sure that I feed you all to the monsters of this swamp...." He turned around and faced the backs of the last two, setting his stance. His speed was just too great for them to even notice that Raijin was behind. And so, before they could even turn and face the young man..they were both decapitated....Justice had been served. After dumping their bodies into the murky swamp water and watching the gators devour the bodies, Raijin had cleaned the blade of the Kusanagi and sheathed it. The Swamp Village was his destination....

Subject: Re: Raijin Uchiha [Done] Mon Mar 21, 2011 4:25 pm

RP sample approved by me~
Now the rest~

D: Your pic doesn't appear for me. Check again if it works.

o_o S-rank? Anything you got that can give you that rank and not that of simple B or A rank?

Quote :: Weapon:
1) Sword of the Gathering Clouds of Heaven (天叢雲剣,Ama-no-Murakumo-no-Tsurugi) - The Sword of the Gathering Clouds of Heaven is a Kusanagi that is said to have been created by Raijin the Lightning God himself. Made from a single lightning bolt, this Kusanagi has a stainless white metal that can cut through most of the hardest materials in the world. It can be enveloped by Raijin's lightning to cut through anything. (Other RP custom weapons not included.) When powered by lightning the blade glows a crimson color and has the same cutting power and ability of Chidori Spear. However, the unique ability of the Kusanagi can be seen once the blade is embedded in the flesh of the opponent. It's energy can vaporize the section around the flesh at the wielder's command. The Kusanagi can also return to it's wielder without being held.

o.o I got nothing against cool swords. I personally love them, especially when they have cool powers. But this is kinda too much. I mean, sure it is a girl of the Lightning God and all, but really. Not only it can cut through everything, but it also can evaporate the molecules of a person's tissues (skin, muscles etc), has similarities to Chidori Spear and it comes back at command to the wielder without being held.
...Denied. It's too powerful and OPed. Choose what abilities it should have.

Quote :: 2) Storm Chain (ストームチェーン, Sutōmuchēn) - The Storm Chain is a Kusarigama in the possession of Raijin. It's basically a sickle with a chain attached to the end which is connected to a thirty pound weight. Besides the fact that it can be used in sync with Raijin's lightning, the weapon cannot be held by another person; it will be too heavy for them. (Like Thor's hammer.)

I want to see somewhere a summoning scroll or something to tell how you carry it with you. Aaaaaand...You can't use it while you have your sword in hand, right?

Quote :: Magen • Kyouten Chiten - Demonic Illusion • Mirror Heaven and Earth Change
Rank: B
Note: Special Bloodline Technique
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
Magen • Kyouten Chiten is a Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. Using the copy and counter functions of the Sharingan eye, the Uchiha clan member can stop the sensory spell cast on their body and reverse it back on their opponent.

Even though this is a jutsu from the series...I don't like this one in rp. So, I'd like you to make a restriction on it.

Quote :: Chidori Eisou - Thousand Birds Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m-10m)
Type: Attack
Chidori Eisou is a Lightning Element technique. The ninja is able to shape the Lightning Element to form an extending spear of lightning. Though unstated, this spear probably takes on Chidori's characteristics, including it's ability to cut through anything which stands in its path, allowing the sword to strike its target with ease. This attack may also be similar to Chidori Nagashi, causing the target to go numb from the electrical charge.

So, again...this is from the series, I know, but this sounds almost like an OPed jutsu. Put a restriction on it if possible.

Quote :: Royal Lightning - Roiyaruraitoningu
Rank: -
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Roiyaruraitoningu is a special Lightning utilized by Raijin. They say that Raijin, the God, had gifted Raijin Uchiha with a special Lightning when he was born. This Lightning is Gold-White in color and is stronger than normal Lightning. In order to use the Lightning, Raijin will have to use a little more chakra.

v_v Is this an element or a jutsu? Either one of them, I need to see a custom element thingy made in the right topic or a rank and range for this jutsu~

Quote :: Kage Suterusu - Shadow Stealth
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
Kage Suterusu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Raijin Uchiha. The ninja will sink into shadows to hide from the enemy or spy on others.

Does this mean that someone with the shadow techniques of Shikamaru can inprison you in it? Also, does it mean that you're 'untouchable' when you are in the shadows? And that you can move from one shadow to another through earth and appear magically at another place?

o_o That'd be all.
Fix the stuff I mentionned above and get another mod/admin to approve about your rp skillz.
Once it's fixed and I saw it again, you'll get my approval.

Subject: Re: Raijin Uchiha [Done] Mon Mar 21, 2011 5:13 pm

1) I have fixed it. You can see the pic now. lol

2) I'm an S-Rank because I assassinated several minor village leaders during my Kagumo times. This would be told in a more descriptive version of my bio. I also killed an infamous S-Ranked shinobi named Touzoku Bakari. Oh yeah, I have S-Rank jutsu and plan on making more till I reach the limit.

3) I deleted the vaporizing part. xD And it can be used in sync with my Lightning.

4) I use a special seal to summon it, just like Hanzo. And yeah, I can't use it with one hand.

5 + 6) Fixed by deleting some stuff on the description.

7) It's just a unique form of Raiton. It's different in color and stronger than the normal Lightning. Oh, it's not a jutsu.

Cool

If a Nara used their shadows on the one I was in, they'd take control of me. No, I'm not untouchable, touch the shadow you touch me. I can only stay in one shadow. If I want to move I have to get out.

Subject: Re: Raijin Uchiha [Done] Mon Mar 21, 2011 7:27 pm

The thingy about your shadow jutsu, add it in your description please~ o-o Noobs usually don't read further than your application. And I dun want to get any complaints later on in rp xD

Subject: Re: Raijin Uchiha [Done] Mon Mar 21, 2011 8:35 pm

True! xD I added the description.

Subject: Re: Raijin Uchiha [Done] Mon Mar 21, 2011 9:13 pm

Thank you~

Subject: Re: Raijin Uchiha [Done] Tue Mar 22, 2011 3:48 pm

Role Play sample is good~ you have a council member's approval.

Subject: Re: Raijin Uchiha [Done] Wed Mar 23, 2011 3:55 pm

Sooo...What else is needed?

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